| "The Quicker Pecker-Upper" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: Xena On: July 18, 2004 12:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am pretty sure that Miroku is 19 or somewhere around that age. It is canon that Kagome was 15 when the show started. I liked this story. After I'm done typing this I'm going to read it for the second time today. I'm the one that came up with the idea of giving Viagra to Miroku.
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Reviewed By: Kellie On: July 18, 2004 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh, that was yummy! I love the idea about the little blue pill. Very well written. Keep up the good work ^___^
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Reviewed By: Behemoth_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 04:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! I'm not sure if I've read a fic like that before.....but then again, I mostly read fics by Drof or DeathLady.....Anyways.....how old is Miroku? twenty-seven? Thirty? A twenty-seven to Thirty year old monk and an eighteen or nineteen year old teenager?? OOOkay......
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Reviewed By: Kyouri [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great, Quickening! I didn't know who to feel sorry for, Miroku (because of his agony) or that poor dejected serving girl. I have absolutely no sympathy for Kagome because I would have played the same trick on him, but Karma came back and bit her in the butt. Good job! Oh, and about Sango's whereabouts? Who cares? It's not about her anyway. ~ Jade
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