| "Fragments of Broken Pride" Reviews/Comments [ 60 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kirie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 14:07 CDT
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Hey, i'm the other Kirie (yes the fake one *grimance*) anyways, um, hi. so, i can't nessisarily say that i liked it (come on now, the Brothers, Together that was a little bad (not in the good way) but i can say that i was honestly adicted to it, couldn't put the damn thing down till like 2 am (unfotunatly i had to wake up at 5 the 'next' morning, so i blame you). thar damn fic of yours (though slightly disterbing) is damn adictting. 'k, well, bye and whatnot...
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Title: hey...
Reviewed By: Hanyou-Tenshiko (from Deviant) On: April 01, 2005 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Are you going to update soon? *big puppy eyes* Please?
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Reviewed By: Kirie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 20:57 CST
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Good job on your fic! :) Even though the Shesshomaru and Inuyasha thing was...um..ewww. Anyways, Why must people always end with such a cut off ending!!!!! ARGGG! If you already got a review from a Kirie, that was my friend who uses my computer account. Keep up the good work and WRITE MORE SOON! later, (the actual, since it is my account) Kirie :)
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: liko On: March 19, 2005 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was really good. i dunno if ur gonna update, but i hope so. i really enjoyed it. poor rin(she's my fav. char.) i hope everything turns out alright with her and sesshy(it was kinda sad)
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Title: Fragments Of Broken Pride
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 17:09 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Inuyasha, Sess, and Kagome please.
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Reviewed By: Water Sprite [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 17:01 CST
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I just realized... that I have been waiting for you to update your fic and hoping that you'd do so soon and I haven't even reviewed yet! Oh woe is me... Anywho ^-^... Please update soon! I LOOOOOVE it! Please update... NOW!! Or ya know, when the chapter gets written or somethin' =^-^=!
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Title: KICKED ASS KICKED ASS
Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU FUCKING ASSHOLES, U EVIL SYDISTIC HANYOU OF A BASTARD U ARE *KICKS THE LIVING SHIT OF NARAKU* YOU MOTHER FU.....*STOPS BEATING TO LOOK AT STUNNED AUTHOR O.O* UMM HEHEHEHE SRRY BOUT THAT ANYWAYS THIS STORY IS FUCKING AWESOME I'M SO HAPPY THAT RIN IS ALIVE SHE'S JUST TO ADORABLE TO BE KILLED. I WONDER WHAT NARAKU HAS IN PLAN WHAT HE WANTS IN RETURN *KICKS NARAKU IN THE NUTS* OH PLEASE PLEASE MAKIE IT A INU/KAGOME/SESSHO STORY PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I WOULD LOVE YOU FOR ALL ETERNITY I WILL SERVE U FOREVER PLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEE ANYWAYS I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE I WONDER WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT. DUN DUN DUN LOL Ja Mata Airy
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Title: AW!
Reviewed By: Hanyou_Miko_Higurashi (not signed in) On: February 20, 2005 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE NOW!!!!!!! *glares and kiicks the living crap out of Naraku* what the hell are you planning?! *huffs* I wanna read more, the threesome lemon is coming up soon....right? *begs with big puppy eyes*
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Title: Grrr...
Reviewed By: yumemaru(not logged in) On: February 19, 2005 14:41 CST
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Evil cliffie.....grrrrrr.....UPDATE! This is an awesome fic. Keep up the good writing! :)
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Reviewed By: Songiesworld(not logged in) On: February 17, 2005 20:25 CST
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I really love this fic so much. I read it for the first time a few days ago and couldn't believe how good of a writer you are. There haven't been that many good writers on here that I can give hands down praise to. But you definitely deserve it. Your awesome at what you do and the in depthness of the story is great. I like how your protraying the other side of Sesshomaru and the possible offset chance that Inu Yasha could probably of had feeling for his bro. KUTGW! ^_^ Songie
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 06:52 CST
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I like readintg this story I think is good I hope you up date soon on it
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! That was an evil cliffhanger! This a great story, I love it. Its good to see Sesshomaru is coming around and that Rin is alive, I hope it's not some mean trick. And I can't believe that Sesshomaru slept with both of them! You don't see that everyday, I would be so cool if this would be a S/K/I paring! I really hope that's what it comes to but I still wonder why Sesshomaru slept with Inuyasha one night and then slept with Kagome the next. I can't wait for the next update so please update soon!
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Title: NUTS!
Reviewed By: *Obese _a_tron5000 not logged in* On: February 14, 2005 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NUTS! Do you know how incredibly mean that was? Leaving it there? DOUBLE NUTS! And nuts! again, I will have to wait for the next chapter, *sigh*. Really great job tho! I like a lot!
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Title: Damn
Reviewed By: Animeluver1368 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. It is original and creative. The only spelling flaw was miasma, that how you spell is. But other than that I loved it. You are able to blend the characters relationships without making them too outrageous. It is not really ooc becuase you have them change. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Behemoth_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evil cliffhanger! I like this chapter! Update soon! Please?! UPDATE!*rips hair out*
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