| "Fragments of Broken Pride" Reviews/Comments [ 60 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shinna On: September 23, 2004 17:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed reading this story. I look forward to reading the next chapters. Keep up the good work. update soon
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Title: YAAAAY!
Reviewed By: Yoake_The_PLEASED_ hanyou On: September 23, 2004 14:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU UPDATED! *give thirty boxes of Krispy Kremes* Update more and I'll give ya more. -Yoake
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Title: Update again!!!
Reviewed By: Hanyou_Miko_Higurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 18:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I'm signed in for once, lol. PWEASE UPDATE!!!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Kira Kitsune ( not logged in ) On: August 17, 2004 15:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Miscreant basically took the words right outta my mouth lol XD Anyhow, guess I'll stick to just saying Great Job and I cant wait for another chappie!
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Reviewed By: Miscreant On: August 14, 2004 04:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This is honestly one of the best pieces i've ever read, and I've definitely had my share of InuYasha fanfiction. Your story is completely original, extremely well written, and an absolute pleasure to read. The character interaction is flawless! What a beautiful tragedy! I rarely review fanfiction, but I wanted to let you know how much I appreciate and value your work. This is coming from an extremely picky person, mind you. Thank you so very much! I was blown away! -Miscreant Side note: The Inu/Kag Inu/Sess Sess/Kag scenes are lovely. It's so nice being able to read a fic where Sesshoumaru and Kagome don't fall head-over-heels for each other after a page's worth of OoC dialogue. The sensitive side of Inu is a nice change from your generic 'Kagome's a/my bitch' and 'Sess's a heartless/attractive bastard' PoV. I'm rambling, aren't I? Ah well. Oh, and this isn't smut! It's got depth! How could I forget that? ^^;;; My birthday is tomorrow and I couldn't have asked for a nicer gift than the opportunity to sink my teeth into 'Fragments of Broken Pride.' Once you update, I'm sure I'll be back to shower you with more praise. Can't thank you enough. 'Till then, I suppose. XD Tah tah!
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Title: GREAT!
Reviewed By: Obese_a_tron5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 00:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OoOoOoOoOoOoOoO I just love it! It's got the Kag/Inu, it's got the Sess/Kag, AND it's got the Inu/Sess, this is absoultey astounding! I aboslutely love your your story so far and I have saved to my favorites, I really love it, and I cannot wait until your next update1
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Title: YAAAY!!!!1
Reviewed By: Yoake_The_Happy_Hanyou On: August 13, 2004 23:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!! You updated! THANK YOU!!!!!! Poor sesshy-chan *tear tear* Anyhoo, I promised you a cookie so, here it is! Don't you give up! *hands a whole box of chocochip cookies* If you write even more, I'll give ya a doughnut too next time. Loves always, Yoake
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 20:30 EDT
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I like this so far. Please update soon! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Emmi-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 16:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know I can't make other folks review, but if what you said is true ("reviews make the writer write faster") then can I have a paragraph or two? Please! You can't leave us poor readers in suspense like this! I NEED to know what happens to Sesshoumaru! Give us more! Pretty please with sugar and cherries and SPRINKLES on top! You can't resist the sprinkles...
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Title: Pwease?!
Reviewed By: Hanyou_Miko_Higurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 16:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww c'mon now, you're killin me here! I wanna know what happens next!! If you need any help or something, feel very free to email me at: aino_senshi_luna@yahoo.com and I will try my damndest to help you out. This is an awesome story and I am addicted to it! Please please please update soon!
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Title: Update PLEEEAAASE
Reviewed By: Hanyou_Miko_Higurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 18:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, you just want me to beg don't you??? *sighs and begs* Anyways, c'mon now, please update for me, I'm actually signed in for once in my miserable anime obsessed life. Now that's a reason to celebrate right? *cries off in a corner*
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Title: This is great!
Reviewed By: Rice-Ball On: July 20, 2004 11:24 EDT
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This is such a great story! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: Hi ya!
Reviewed By: Yoake_the_Sniffling_Hanyou On: July 19, 2004 23:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello again!!! I'm lovin this story you've written so, I demand an update! Please? *gives big dewy anime chick eyes* I'll give ya a cookie, pwease???
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 20:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story, I usually don't get into yaoi stories, but you really have my attention. Please update soon, I want to see where this story goes
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Title: NOOO!!!! POOR RIN!
Reviewed By: Yoake_The_Bawling_Hanyou On: July 18, 2004 19:26 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could you just kill Rin-chan??? OO, that makes me hate that damned bastard even more than I already do! Inu and Sess, even tho they are brothers, I like that pairing, the threesome is gonna be good too. *grins evilly* Please update and fast! You've got a loyal reader here, even if I'm not signed in. Keep going! Hanyou_Miko_Higurashi, Authoress of Always Watching
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