Reviewed By: Forlorn Essence [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 11:47 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This is so cute ^^, I love chapter 4 with the songs, especially the second one, and it was such a joy to read! Spelling and grammer is something you should work on a little bit more, but other than that, it was very enjoyable!
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