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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My respect for Hotaru has risen indeed as well as Nodoka, I am not truelly suprised by anything the NWC or genma does , Hpoowever having a Twin sis for Ranma well I would never really of thought of that, Top marks for inspired creativity Shadow Megatron
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Reviewed By: Shadowbakasama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
A pathetic Ranma is a GOD fic so far. You have Ranma starting out the story with mega-kami powers. You should have started the story when Ranma met up with Usagi and got banished to another dimension, NOT have him come back with super rediculus power ups. Start Over. Try Again. Delete this.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 09:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1 it was great. Keep those chapter coming. You are an artist.
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