| "A Moment In Time" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: XD
Reviewed By: EdwardWongHauPepleuTivruskyIV [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 21:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll be cool and give you a 10, not because I necessarily liked the lemony stuff, it's just a well written piece for the most part. A few, minor, minute grammatical details, but that is all. Besides this, the descriptions and such are flowing, and well written. Nice job on the Julia sister concept, but I hope you take it further. Also, I liked Electra, but I have to concur, Faye X Spike coupling after his second death, and Julia's is much more sensible. Good job and I hope to see more work from you soon.
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Reviewed By: lemonysnicketlimey On: November 30, 2004 00:37 CST
Comment/Review:
I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY!!!
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Reviewed By: sadaboxter83 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 22:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
very good please do update asap :0)
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Reviewed By: finalfantasyfreak On: August 20, 2004 01:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic!!! Make sure you keep updating!
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Reviewed By: Broken_Shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 21:36 CDT
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this is good so far and don't feel bad i thought it was called say goodbye too which would've made sense but i think that since its about someone who basically acted like someone they weren't and fooled everyone well it made more sense to call it take a bow. i hope u understand what i meant and i hope i didn't confuse you. i came close to confusing myself. @_@
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Reviewed By: Broken_Shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 21:36 CDT
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this is good so far and don't feel bad i thought it was called say goodbye too which would've made sense but i think that since its about someone who basically acted like someone they weren't and fooled everyone well it made more sense to call it take a bow. i hope u understand what i meant and i hope i didn't confuse you. i came close to confusing myself. @_@
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Title: Awsome Chapter
Reviewed By: Belladandy07 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 19:27 CDT
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I loved this chapter.Faye was going to die that is pretty sad.Well i thought this chapter was the best.Please update soon.I really enjoyed it.I am getting soo excited about the next chapter.Why isn't anyone reveiwing.I'll kill them for not reveiwing such a great story.Well Till then.
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Reviewed By: Foxflame..not signed in On: August 03, 2004 17:42 CDT
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hey...i thought i shuld begin the circle of crap on this site... im surprised no one reviewed, and down right angery at them! buh i love em n e way. well good chappi, keep it up, and speed up the writting hunn...even thou ppl wunt admitt it in these reviews, they want more!-fox
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