| "Scar Tissue" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Mabbline911220 On: July 28, 2011 05:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your story is good and I like how it all began, its very unique and different. I like your optimistic writing style. But its somewhat unbelievable meaning that its not to realistic because everything is always peachy and happy. There doesn't seem to be a conflict arising yet. Update soon! I wanna read want happens next. |
Reviewed By: Inuyasha2000 On: July 15, 2011 11:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought the story was good but u could of put chapters in like how the end up together or got married and had a baby or what vaporizes if inuyasha does kick her out and she has to go back to derrick empty handed and some thing bad happens to her or he kills her and inuyasha fond out inuyasha finds out in the newspaper that she was murdered and left in a alley and inuyasha go out to find derrick and kills Him and after does he falls into depression stage and thinks that he was the cause of her dying or some thing like that other than the story not being long enough I thought it was great I'm not a writter or anything i just like to read inuyasha storys but I can tell your really good at writeingbye and good luck with what ever your doing |
Title: hey what's up
Reviewed By: snowdeep On: August 03, 2007 20:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi again i was just wondering when your going to update again it's been awhile i'm sorry if it sounds like i'm pressureing you cause i'm not i was just wondering because it's been forever and the story is inching me like real bad Kagome is such a mystery and how is Inuyasha going to keep her a sercert from his brother.So please onmy hands and knees please update.
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 19:58 EDT
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This is a really good story. I am absolutely loving it. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 21:49 EDT
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this is a cool story. good job. please update soon.
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: snowdeep On: February 21, 2007 21:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your story i think it so intersing i like to know more about Kagomes past its kind of bugging me i also want to know about how inuyasha and kagome's relationship turns out i would like it if you would please update i would really like to know what happens next so please please please please update and soon im on the verge of crying well got to go bye
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Reviewed By: Tweak [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 14:37 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Write more asap! I really like it.
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 13:56 EDT
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sweet story!!! continue please!!!!!and think about what i said earlier
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 13:47 EDT
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i really like this story but i was wondering if you could put what the japanese words mean at teh bottom of your next chapter. i don't know a lot of japanese yet so that qould really help me out. thanxs so much ^-^
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 00:05 EDT
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this story's cool. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Chey Town [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 18:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really REALLY liked your story and hope that you write more soon.
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Reviewed By: oashisunoyume [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 18:19 EDT
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wow excellent story...cant wait until you update! ^_^ good job
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Title: Good Job So Far
Reviewed By: SkyMaster [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 07:46 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I belive that have started a good fic and I eagerly await the next chapter. The idea was faily original and you have hooked me with suspense in the very first chapter. Please Hurry with Chapter 2.
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Title: Good Job So Far
Reviewed By: SkyMaster [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 07:46 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I belive that have started a good fic and I eagerly await the next chapter. The idea was faily original and you have hooked me with suspense in the very first chapter. Please Hurry with Chapter 2.
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