| "The Sexy Lemon Pants" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Kurinju-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 17:25 CDT
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And is this how you get rid of writer's block...?=P Wonderful work! I loved it.
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Title: Good.
Reviewed By: Keiko89 On: May 15, 2005 16:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol. That was a great one-shot, very well written. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: hgfhhasghs On: November 09, 2004 20:02 CST
Comment/Review:
awesome i read ranma too
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Reviewed By: Winged_Isis [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I have a few things to say... First: WOHHHHHHH! Great fic!!! Second: HOW THE HELL DO YOU KNOW MY ACTIONS WHILE WRITING FANFICTION???? It was amazing! The whole thing with Kags practically burying herself in her room all night long, frantically typing on her laptop, desperately trying to get inspiration - that's me! Hell, I even have reading glasses! Unfortunately, I currently suffer from a acute lack of a boyfriend, so I just can't fall back on the kind of inspiration that Kags took for herself *sobs* Anyways, I enjoyed your story! Two thumbs up!
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Reviewed By: M1Lk Ch0C0l4t3 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
you call this a fanfic? sexy but not enough!
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: ktakn_yeni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just like you said. short cute to the point.. and that made it very good. congrats!
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Reviewed By: samshidfnsa On: July 26, 2004 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sexy sex like sexoholic
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good, not the best possible considering all your other works but still, this was great.
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Reviewed By: Lainey [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 10:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't usually like to start a review out like this but I am. I don't think you gave this fic your all. It seemed rather strange and confusing. It can quite possibly be that you are on a "lemon block" and that is what gave you the urge to write this half-hearted fic. I've read your other stories and Oh my God they are incredible. They surpass any other lemon fic/fics that are here on mediaminer. They're beautifully written, and they have your unique touch in every one of them. I just don't feel that this one has that same touch. To tell you the truth, it seemed almost desperate. I hope you get back on the ball soon and start squeezing out those lemons. (Yes, pun intended)
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Reviewed By: C.T. Rae On: July 21, 2004 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Job! Love it, love it, love it! And I was giggling the whole way through! And it's so true! I have some black pants with lemons on them for my 'lemon-block' moments! Kepp up the good work!
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Reviewed By: the guy under my review. On: July 21, 2004 11:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite interesting
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Reviewed By: laura aka Gittelbug On: July 20, 2004 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great and fun
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo how very sexy
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