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Title: Chapter Six
Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such an amazing story so far... It is really well written and has a lot of great intulectual(sp) dialog. I would have reviewed sooner, I just couldn't stop reading it. I marked this in my favorites. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 19:59 CDT
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This has been really interesting so far. ^_^ I'm glad you updated or I wouldn't have seen this story. You've definitely got a good mystery vibe going. Who killed Kikyo? Why did they kill her? Why can't Inuyasha remember anything? WHO TOOK MY CHOCOLATE CAKE?! I'm hoping you'll keep updating so I can find out the answers to these questions...well, except that last one. I think I'm on my own there. Cheers!
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Reviewed By: inuyashafanaticllmv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nooooooooooo how could it end just there *pout* i love ur story so much especially ur writing style :)
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Reviewed By: Hyena On: May 27, 2008 06:12 CDT
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UUUUPPPDDDDDAAAATTTTTEEEEEEEEE if you please
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Reviewed By: Hyena On: May 26, 2008 10:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
UUUUUPPPPDDDDDAAAAATTTTEEEEE please
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Reviewed By: Anina On: May 22, 2008 09:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
But why...? Why are the good stories always incomplete or abandoned? You didn't update this story since 2006! Please don't give it up, it's too good to be left in such a state! ~Anina-chan
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Reviewed By: katie33h [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 13:00 CDT
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This story is really great so far. i hope you havent abandoned it! i love the cannon esque quality and the interation between charaters. Again i hope you didnt give it up ... your reviews are kind of low in numbers but its ok i hope that that didnt detur you!
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Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 11:59 CST
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I really like this story, I just started reading it. I have only read 5 or 6 chapters. I am confused about one thing, Kagome was thinking that about Kikyo and what she had told her about Inuyasha and that she could imagine her cheating on him. I could be mistaken, I'll go back and check later, but didn't she say in an early chpter she never knew Kikyo was engaged or even her Inuyasha's name until the furneral? I can't wait to finish reading what you have so far. Again, LOVE the story
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Reviewed By: C.A. (not signed in) On: January 14, 2007 11:45 CST
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Wow... I'm really liking this story. It's going on my favs list so I know when it's updated :P I knew from your referencing the broken step that it would be significant in some way. Your characterization is really good as well. Poor Inu, not knowing if he killed his fiance or not. I just love it. I'll be waiting for an update :P
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 05:33 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I knew he would figure out that the clue was in the steps, maybe it is in the loose one he never got to fix that has the clue. And I wonder what it is, well I'll find out in your next chapter or so. Hope you update soon and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Sidelines On: October 25, 2006 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The neverending Story. The rockbiter says that line, my favorite movie as a small child by the way. Anyways great story, keep writing and I will keep reading.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 02:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is good. I like it a lot, but I really like the mistery in the story and the love. I bet you're going to torture us by taking to damn long to update this wonderful story huh? Well please don't, its to good. So please update soon and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Bumbleflies and Butterbees [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow! Oh wow oh wow! I absolutely LOVE this story. I just started into this yesterday and couldn't stop reading it. You are an amazing writer! I love the way you combine humor and mystery and romance into one. It just rolles off the page. I absolutely LOVE the way you portray all of the characters. You make them your own without completely deviating from the real character. It is awesome. I absolutely love the story line and plot, but I really loved this last chapter. THEY KISSED!!!! WHOO HOO!!! I'm really excited right now. Anywho. I can't wait for the next chapter to come up. I'm really excited about it. Until then.... Happy Writing!
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Reviewed By: hi On: September 10, 2005 03:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon
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Reviewed By: Night_Miko (not logged in) On: April 19, 2005 03:18 CDT
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I am so glad you have updated. I hope everything in your life becomes less complicated. I hope that you will update once again soon.
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