Reviewed By: princesskywynn On: August 29, 2004 06:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, thank you for writing Ai no Kusabi stories. There are nowhere near enough of them. Second of all, this series had me hooked from the very beginning. I usually don't review a story until it's finished but this chapter was simply to good to not post a comment. Raoul and Riki's hatred for each other combined with an obvious physical attraction was a stroke of genius. To think that Iason is now jealous of Raoul is rich. The complexity of emotions that you have given these characters make your story interesting and not just about the sex. I'm looking forward to reading more of this delicious series. I would love advance notice on new chapters. My email address: princesskywynn@comcast.net
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