| "Youji's Daughter" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Shadowfox_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 19:14 CDT
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This is really great, I hope to read more of it. :)
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Reviewed By: ryushin_san On: August 05, 2004 11:47 CDT
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They are so in love - its great, its fluffy and although I'm still a little on the awkward side with mpreg, I like your story. Keep going, I keep reading. Good work. ryushin
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: chelly On: July 23, 2004 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was HILARIOUS and sweet at the same time! I want Aya sedated the whole time - you wrote him so well! More! More!
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: chelly On: July 23, 2004 20:42 CDT
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This was HILARIOUS and sweet at the same time! I want Aya sedated the whole time - you wrote him so well! More! More!
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Title: Woot!
Reviewed By: Vampire Louis [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read this -again- and I'm reminded of how brilliant you are as a writer. The first three chapters are nice and dark, clever and well written. The fourth chapter is pure humor to give the reader a little boat in the lake of angst you have created. Totally Awesome. I swear I have to stop reading the forth chapter so I can catch my breath from laughing so hard. Rock on my friend, keep writing!
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Reviewed By: YohjiBabe2008 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is very funny. I like the way you made Ran so poetic. Had me laughing thoughout the whole fourth chapter can't wait to read more!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tigermink On: July 21, 2004 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD.. omg, omg,omg. I couldn't stop laughing this was precious. Aya spouting purple prose to yoji in front of others..on man i can't wait untill the next chapter.
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