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| "Mercy of the mers" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: KawaiiMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 17:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, this is pretty good, but you need to make sure that you revise and edit. (If you want, I can help you, I am a grammar FREAK). Also, Do you need help getting the chapters posted correctly? Also, you said that people could use your idea as long as you got credit right? Because your story gave me an idea. If you need help, e-mail me at kawaiihoushikun@hotmail.com
| Title: cool
Reviewed By: kasumi the vampire queen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 14:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
you need to make it longer and more descriptive. you hould give it a spell check to. i liked it alot it was pretty good you should really add more to it. do you want me to help you with it?, it seemed like you were having trouble loadng it into the website. if you need any help just e-mail me, my e-mail is on my profile.^_^.
| Reviewed By: Mangagirl128 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 18:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
ummm... You got to add chapters. Please add chapters! It seems like a really good fic!
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