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"Embrace The Night" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ]
 Title: Embrace The Night
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 27, 2006 00:11 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
 Reviewed By: AC  On: July 24, 2005 18:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
so allow me to get this right. Sess, a youkai who hates humans (except Rin, dunno why) suddenly rapes Kagome. Kagome suddenly becomes a lustful bitch who gives blowjobs and swears. Is that right? Because that's just plain pathetic.
 Title: Embrace The Night
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 21, 2005 16:30 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
 Title: Embrace The Night
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer  On: November 19, 2004 21:20 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
 Title: Embrace The Night
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer  On: November 02, 2004 18:02 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
 Reviewed By: blackat  On: July 26, 2004 08:49 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Not really makeing in f*%#ing cents to me but it was good really good
 Reviewed By: tonysmom  On: July 22, 2004 09:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok.. it's too clinical, and too rushed. Good idea, but a successful lemon is like good sex. You have to tease the reader a bit more, staying away from words that would ruin the mood. description is nice, use the same type of wording you would use in poetry. this type of lemon needs more dark imagery, less blunt language.

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