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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 17:45 CST Comment/Review: OMFG I LOVED IT ^-^ I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: jeanjellybean On: February 19, 2005 22:11 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: i loved it. it had a great style and was creative. i hope you keep writing, and i loved it, agian. there were a few spelling/grammer stuff, but it was good anyhow. keep writing! bai -jean
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Reviewed By: Vagabond [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 15:32 CDT Comment/Review: I think that is a great way of ending your story... without making Inuyasha's and Kagome's realtionship go any farther. Because usually, in sequals, if ythe love has already been confessed, than the story gets kind of boring. So keep it up! I'm looking foward to the sequal! Until Next Time! This is Vagabond, signing out!
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Reviewed By: xXdArKn3sSxWitHinXx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 20:59 CDT Comment/Review: yay! that was such a good way to end this fic... for now! but that was great! i luved it soo0o0oo much! oh i'm so happy! i cant wait to read the sequel! continue writing!
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Reviewed By: wolfstar03 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 20:51 CDT Comment/Review: i just went back and read your lil author note. Aftermath's Destruction? that is a lil creepy don't cha think? plus what could possible happen now? (i know i'm asking for it now with that question, lol) ok , can't wait
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Reviewed By: wolfstar03 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 20:48 CDT Comment/Review: funny, i like; update soon
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] (just not logged in) On: August 30, 2004 15:54 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow keep up the good work i'll be looking out for that sequel seeing how this was just so good but in the sequel will Kagome and InuYasha get together finally? oh well it's your story now go and post that great sequel we all kno it will be!!! lmao ^_^
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 00:04 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hm... will she accept? or not? Will kouga give up? or not... Will Yuki, Eri, and um *insert frined's name here* set her up with Inu? or not... will I be able to come up with more annoying questions? or not... Heh... I couldn't resist that, so great fic, everybody seemed in character to my non-observent self. My fav. part was with Koharu, and how Miroku faked a fiance. Your going to have to say what happens, nah, never mind. Your writing an epilouge, so be magically motivated and write! yay... all authoresses, or authors wish they could do that. Hm, I saw nothing wrong with your fic, but I'm sadly lacking in observation skills, so don't listen to me when I say that. But bask in the pride and glory of a well-written fanfiction! *trumpets sound*
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 23:55 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: awsome how your doing a sequel but i'm saddend that this fic is ending next chappy! so keep up the good work i'll be looking out for the sequel!!!! update soon again! ^_^
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Reviewed By: kawaii_chan On: August 25, 2004 02:11 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: DONT TOY!!!!! THATS NOT NICE IM GOING TO CRY!!! WAH!!!!! BUT ANYWAYZ I LOVED THE STORY ITZ SO SCARY BUT SWEET.. 0_0' (is that possible!) whats the sequal called? i wanna read! JIN JIN WANTS TO READ MORE!YOU MAKE GOOD STORY!!! i cant wait till i read sequal!!!
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Title: hehehe Reviewed By: WS03 aka wolfstar03 On: August 24, 2004 18:51 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ME TOO, INU ANY DAY. update soon
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Title: short Reviewed By: wolfstar03 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 17:36 CDT Comment/Review: that chap was a little short, update soon
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