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| "Even someone evil can be turned good" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Angel12 On: March 02, 2005 15:00 CST
Comment/Review:
no matter what anyone says(ahem,AHEM*), I think it's funny. so keep writing. because sometimes this is exactly the kind of story that is fun to read, not the long boring ones!!!!!!!!!!! LoL
| Title: ?
Reviewed By: ? On: August 15, 2004 23:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
meh... it was interesting i'll give it that
| Title: ano...constructive criticism anyone?!
Reviewed By: Eh? On: August 11, 2004 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, first of all, this isn't a flame, I just want to give you some concstructive criticism: Your writing style is lacking severely. You have a great potential, you just haven't doveloped your writing style properly. You might want to check into using quotes. Your spelling was great, only a few typos and your grammer only had several missuses on the past tense. The creativity and originality was great, I've not seen another Furuba fic like it. I would have enjoyed it a whole lot more if the writing style was improved. The writing style and the anjoyment factor were big factors in your over rating, but the grammar and origonality knocked it up. Don't think this review suggests you should stop writing, if anything you should write MORE!! Practice makes perfect, ne? Please don't be mad I didn't just mindlessly praise you and actually gave you some useful advice! ja ne Eh?
| Reviewed By: ilovekyosohma [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um,It was entertaining...But the pregnancy thing just kind of blew me ofcourse,haha.
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