| "BabySitting" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: *snerk*
Reviewed By: Iris (t3h author) On: April 22, 2005 23:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
hate to say I told you so.. but...
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Title: I agree; WTF
Reviewed By: MikaKitty666 On: January 19, 2005 07:16 CST
Comment/Review:
I totally agreee with Hado; that story had absalutely not point to it what so ever! Maybe you should try reading some of the stories by bakurasgirl, dragondreamer, and bishojo shadow.
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Title: wtf
Reviewed By: Hado On: January 17, 2005 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
are you 2 years old or something? This makes no sense at all. Joey wants to practically rape Mokuba and while he's at it, he realizes he loves him and then he invites Yugi over and then they go to the mall and have sex there while they're shopping? Yeah, evidently Joey loves mokuba very much. at least enough to humilliate him like that. And how can mokuba not know what fucking is? If he is capable of having an erection, he must be like 12 or 14 years old, and a boy at that age knows what fucking is... and THIS JUST DOESN'T MAKE ANY SENSE. The characters are absolutely ooc and the plot is just so BAD. Sorry, but I hated it.
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Reviewed By: anne bolyen On: September 16, 2004 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Iam thinking pretty dang goooood.For this type of fic.
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