| "Ten Ways to Show You Care" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Ten Ways to show You Care
Reviewed By: Jane/Sabrina On: April 20, 2005 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow great story.Keeop up the good work & please continue writing this.'Till next time bye.
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Reviewed By: Klahasbsdvkvgukgvhhhhhhhhh (Kerica) On: January 28, 2005 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Look, I'm reviewing! please don't hunt me down with the bloody bat) =].I love your story. i also love watching this thing count backwards from 1500. lol. but enough about me and more about your fic. your story is very good, but you have made a few gramatical errs that make no sense. For one, you often put she instead of he and it all makes it very confuzling and confusing to the reader. Other than that, i really love the story and I can't wait for the next chapter. Love I
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Title: Beta and Artist
Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, u know my thoughts on this story. I have a rough of rain done, but when i tried to send it to you, it said ur e-mail addy didnt exist! my address is mari@cityofshalom.com, try setting up a yahoo addy and get back to me.
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Reviewed By: LSR-7 On: August 29, 2004 01:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, a little bit too much swearing for my tastes, but oh well. Just gotta tell you that a couple of the sentences seem similar to what is in ArtemisMoon's fanfic. The chocolate comments with Sesshoumaru...
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Reviewed By: Williesama On: August 15, 2004 21:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Uh, forget my last comment of being a beta reader.
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Reviewed By: Williesama On: August 15, 2004 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*smile* Me likey. Please, please go on. This is one of the best I have read, and I know, I used to be a moderator of Fanfiction, that, and a very mean critic. There are a few wrongly used words here and there, but it is really great! BTW, I might be a beta reader. My e-mail is kage_maru@sbc.global.net BTW, what is a beta reader? Seriously, what is a beta reader?
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Reviewed By: aikotakara [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 21:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
aww!!!! poor inu! frying pans hurt! i should know XP anyways great story! keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: pouty On: July 29, 2004 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS A VERY INTERESTING START TO THE STORY! IT SOUNDS LIKE IT WILL BE AWESOME! IM SO LOOKIN FORWARD TO READIN MORE!
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Reviewed By: Kuroi Koneko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. I look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: seeyouspacecowgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't beleive no one has reviewed this story! I like it so far, from the summary it seems like you have a good idea, keep writing. :) please update!!!
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