| "lovers" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Kit/Chelsea's sister On: February 02, 2005 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sup D.J! How's it hangin'? I couldn't read your story cause I just don't wanna.*TeeHee*
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Reviewed By: kagome16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i wrote it and it sucks, I know. oh well.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha is mine(chelsea) On: September 08, 2004 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Comment/Review:
Write more!!!!!!!!!!!!! You still need to work on your choice of word. But tour doing a great job so far!
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Reviewed By: kagome16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 14:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Your story is good for your first time! You just need to edit it. BUT I LOVE YOUR STORY SO FAR!
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