Title: it could be a great fic
Reviewed By: VampiricEssence [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
it has potiental.but i dont want to seem mean,but arent you supposed to put a summary of the chapter where it says chapter summary?your fic seems great just well how do i say it...confusing.I dont want to offend you or complain i just want your story to be good.
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