| "Hell's Angel, Heaven's Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Title: Hell's Angel, Heaven's Demon
Reviewed By: tyleet88 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 10:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is a very good piece of work. I hope you start updating this soon it's very good. plz keep it going
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 12:41 CDT
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Hey! I read your fic and I like it. I can't remember if I reviewed when You added the last chap but here it is even if I didn't. I love your story and it is soooo cute the way you wrote Heero and Duo. Hope you haven't given up on this one. I really love it.
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Nephra On: February 28, 2005 18:43 CST
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Hey this was an awsome yu hold really update it very soon. I've read every chapter and am really anxious t read more. Keep up the good work you really hve potential.
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Title: Kate
Reviewed By: kittenhug2001@hotmail.com On: December 05, 2004 10:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story and I hope you continue as soon as possible. I am including one sentence of constructive criticism. Okay, here goes.....try to only use one tense. You sometimes switch between past and present. Damnit! That was two sentences. Sorry! Anyway, this story is really good and I am hoping that maybe there will be more interaction between Duo and his father. It was just soooo cute when they met! O_O WOW! I think this is the longest review I have ever written. Keep up the good work! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Alea On: December 04, 2004 17:38 CST
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wow, cute ^.^ can just imagine Duo and Heero sprouting wings :P keep up the good work, update soon ne! ^.^
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Title: interresting
Reviewed By: Miststalker [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 22:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
well the plotline and story are obviously well thought out however your grammar could use a major overhaul. There were several times that you used a double negative and other times were it was obvious that you meant to put in a negative but didn't. If you don't have a gramtik get one if you have one and it's telling you these mistakes are correct toss it and get a new program. Overall I like this fic I'd love to read more and see where it's going. You have a good imagination. Please continue writing (if you need help with grammar feel free to e-mail me at miststalker5@yahoo.com) Good luck Miststalker
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Reviewed By: runeessence On: October 31, 2004 19:13 CST
Comment/Review:
please continue, stuffs starting to happen yay! awesome story!
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Reviewed By: Aylar On: October 02, 2004 10:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! you updated, I hope you get over your writer's block and update some more
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Reviewed By: rune essence (didnt want to loggin) On: October 01, 2004 23:14 CDT
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please keep up the good work! can't wait until duo and heero become a couple (crossing my fingers) ^_^
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: Aylar On: September 14, 2004 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story makes me happy, please update your story soon please!
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Reviewed By: *shinigami* On: August 20, 2004 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it!!!!^_^hehe!!rite more !!rite MORE!!ALREADY!!!please update sooooooooon!!
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Title: good chapter
Reviewed By: TKM [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 12:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
That is great progress but everything is so slow and nothing really is happening :(
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Title: Great chapter
Reviewed By: TKM [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is great chapter. Everything procidess very slov what I mind but it is great story.
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Title: Good chapter
Reviewed By: TKM [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 11:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great progress, but the ending is the best. I will wait for more
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Reviewed By: aspara On: July 31, 2004 23:48 CDT
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My heart is bleeding for Duo.
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