| "Pepper & China Roses" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Spiderblood On: November 25, 2004 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic, I am so glad you decided to return to it. And thank you for not leaving me with that nasty cliffhanger. My only complaint is that it was a little hard to follow the dialouge of excatly who was saying what. But the topics and your unique insight mostly made up for that. I am loving where this is going and I cant wait to see how you tie Zechs in to all of this. So write fast, and write well. Peace
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Reviewed By: saradee On: November 08, 2004 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would have given you a ten, but this is too short to be a chapter, this is a teaser. after more than a month without any contact. You ARE EVIL!!!!!!! Well I love where this could go, so plz, get your laptop and go there. Those of us with little imagination cannot wait to read what you decide to do with this story.
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Reviewed By: Rude not signed in On: October 08, 2004 17:57 CDT
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Hello! Thank you all for the reviews ^_^*** even if I coersed you a bit.. erhm....In a few more days I will have the next two chapters finished. Plot bunny gave me a few ideas for the weekend, something good about insomnia!
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Reviewed By: saradee On: October 06, 2004 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, i love evil conspiracy theories, you have built it up so great i really want to read more, so write more, Please!
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Reviewed By: drkwndz On: September 16, 2004 04:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off did you mean to post chapter 8 twice? Also the explaination for the chinese at the end was kinda confusing. Aside from that and some grammar and spelling stuff which is just me being nit-picky I realy like this fic and hope that the crickets dont kill your plot bunny.
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Reviewed By: jaya18 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 22:14 CDT
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This is a very fun fic to read, and I look forward to reading more.
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