"Ivy's Quest" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: FanFicPotato [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 23:08 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review: No offense to you. But if you are going to write... at least have a longer story. Better yet for your title, it should had been just dirty sex. In fact, it wasn't even detailed. I didn't even read it all b/c it wasn't that good. I mean really it wasn't. And usually i'm nice, b/c I think mine suck. Alright... you can read one of mine. Just go search for mine by my author's name and read one of mine. I mean they may not be the best... and if you get all angsty and want to rate me bad cuz I rated you bad... go ahead cuz i don't care... but still read mine or fix yours or something. I'll pray for you or something.
| Reviewed By: Lina Inverse [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 21:00 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review: OK, it was fun to read, I'll give you that, but PLEASE! FIX YOUR GRAMMAR!
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