| "Once upon a time...Sugar and Spice" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 07:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like where your story is going. You sound like your on the way to a very intresting plot. PlEASE, update soon I'm dying to know how the picnic went, it sounds like it'll be one hell of an afternoon.
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Reviewed By: EbonyQueen2015 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 16:00 CDT
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I hope u write somthing soon!PLZ!!!PLZ!!!PLZ!!!PLZ!!!PLZ!!!PLZ!!!PLZ!!!PLZ!!!PLZ!!!PLZ!!!PLZ!!!
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 01:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
awesome story update soon please
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Reviewed By: i said i'm ALWAYS on but not ALWAYS there. On: June 13, 2005 19:08 CDT
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finish story now.
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 22:42 CDT
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i love your story, its good, keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: SapphireDreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 09:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
moving a little fast and the grammar is a little off, but other than that, i love it! the concept is awesome and i'm excited to see how the story turns out. update, please!
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Reviewed By: virgochic1981 On: August 21, 2004 17:14 CDT
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i like how this story is going, can't wait for the update
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*logged out* On: August 21, 2004 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one idea: KILL OFF KIKYO!!! yea and i think your grammer's a lil off so...yea...fix that. and also yesh you are moving a lil fast but thats k.....UPDATE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: animehasmylife [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 23:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Continue!!
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Reviewed By: KiTTy PAws-182 On: August 14, 2004 21:06 CDT
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Wow! This is a good story! Update soon.And also loke the other reviews I want to know if this is a Kag/Inu fic? Because I think thre a good Couple(Plus I don't like Kikyo) -KiTTy PAws-182
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Reviewed By: bu-chan On: July 27, 2004 23:40 CDT
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is this an inu/kag fic or inu/kik? just wanna know~~~ its just that i hate kikyo n i like kagome just like mean_bitch_hate_kikyou
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Title: kool story
Reviewed By: mean_bitch_hate_kikyou On: July 27, 2004 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i found it very kool i just have to wonder does the k stand for kagome or kikyou (*couch* bitch) please do tell and also the story who wonderfull and with kikyou *couch* bitch die!!!!!!!!!!!! if she does then do tell me nd if the story ends with inuyasha and kikyou i perosonally i will feel very sad i do like kagome do you? and now i wil tell you why i hate kikyuo 1. she tried to kill inuyasha and bring him to hell 2. she is die and she should rest in peace and let kagome and iunyasha have a wondergul life together 3. she also tried to kill kagome i mean kagome a sweet beauty young girl 4. i hate very very very very much and if you like kikoyu i okay but i will ask you to tried to write a kagome anf inuyasha fanfiction please !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: GREAT!!!!
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru_kagura [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great story please continue =(^.^)= i started reading one of your other stories very good!wait no great! exallent!
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Reviewed By: lemony fresh (not signed in) On: July 26, 2004 11:18 CDT
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meh i liked it :3 please update soon ^-^
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Reviewed By: Mare Serenatis On: July 25, 2004 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You will write more, or I shall call down the wrath of the Great and Powerful Cute One(aka my pet baby tortoise, Bob) But seriously, this is an excellent beginning to what appears to be an excellent fan fic. Keep up the good work!
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