| "Who Will Save Me?" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: chapter 4
Reviewed By: Motje [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 07:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the whole story. It was great *thumbs up* excilent writing. At the end I had to Aww ^^ those two are so sweet together. Someow I'm sad the story ended. It was great
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Title: . . . . . . . . . . . !!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Unholy Goddess of Destruction! . . . Dark? DARK?! Dark is . . . ok so it's perfect. But dear gods! . . . OK . . . this is far and away from what I normally read . . . hell this is the first time I have read anything like this, and the tools scare ME too . . . But I think I'm going to have to finish reading this now. And you have just made it onto my favorites. I will keep reading if you keep writing. It's nice that Yami and crew finally found Yugi, but I get the distinct impression that this isn't ending yet. I can just see Adroth forcing Yugi to say he won't leave, or watch as he somehow captures Yami as well so he can get off on watching them have sex. Then again I can also see Yami being so angry he just violently rips Adroth's body apart with shadow powers. Or worst of all, Adroth lets Yugi go only to have established some sort of telepathic link to him, which he uses to torture and torment Yugi in much the same fashion as he has been already. And being that it's happening all in Yugi's mind Yami can't really do too much to stop Adroth. Dear gods, I can just see this as the first it a series of fics with Adroth as a reoccurring character. His meticulous nature is just disturbing.
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Title: Ahhh! No you evil thing you!! ^_^
Reviewed By: jhoney [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my hells! You've got to finish this soon please. I can't stand the tension. I can only imagine what hell yami will give this poor bastard. BTW, very funny that outburst Yami did on Bakura ^_~* LOLMAO XD You rock as always gal.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: lDragen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 15:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is twisted and evil, interesting. Please update, I would like to know what happens.
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Reviewed By: Shaded Faith [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Meow love you! ^^ Thankies for updating so quickly--! Yaaayy! Yami's there! Everything will be better once he's there...right?? Oh, congrats on your new love :3 Happiness for you ^__^
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Reviewed By: Motje [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good stuff.. It reads easily. It's good to reads different stuff once in awhile. I hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: Shaded Faith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 12:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Those "tools" scare me...o__O;; Other than that, yayness for updating :3 The suspense is killing me ^^;
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Reviewed By: White Phoenix Eternal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, nice angst/hentai combo. Please continue soon! Hope Yami will find Yugi!
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Reviewed By: Shaded Faith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heya ^^ Great fic so far :3 Please update soon! [Tee hee, I'm happy I got to be first review!] Congrats on a job well done for this :D!!
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