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| "Fateful Night" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 > » ] | Reviewed By: Ninevrise /Angi On: August 10, 2005 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this tale that you're weaving. I started reading it months ago, but I just started reading the chapters you've posted since then. Oh, it's just delectable! I really want to know how this story is going to go. I really hope that nasty case of writer's block goes away, SOON. Best of luck to you. Oh, and you are soooo lucky to be able to be living in Japan! Just had to mention that.
| Reviewed By: ioialoha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 21:22 CDT
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UPDATE!!!! good story, good premise, NEED MORE!!! (we are a demanding lot, aren't we? ^^)
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really liked your fic. Soon as I started reading, had to keep reading. I must admit, I am picky. I only like Inuyasha/Kogome paired together so when I look for one to read, thats the main thing I look for. And this fit the bill to a tee. Great story all around. OK, Next question....anymore?
| Title: masterpeise
Reviewed By: amyfushigiyugii On: May 16, 2005 09:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A+++++++++ fanfiction ^_^ now just keep writing!!!
| Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. I love the new look at an old tale. I just couldn't stop reading. I hope you get a chance to update soon.
| Title: Ch. 15
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: February 09, 2005 01:38 CST
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You really aught to stop apologizing for your writing. There is nothing to be sorry for. You are doing a fine job of transforming your imagination into words and thank you for sharing them with us. -- It looks like InuYasha's connection with Kagome is getting stronger if he can tell she's having a nightmare from far off. I guess he needs to make sure there is more food next time before she goes to sleep! LOL - Poor hungry Yash-kun. -- Well, I made it to your final-to-date chapter and it is almost midnight here. I sure hope you don't take too long to post the next chappie! --- Good job, Hun!
| Title: Ch. 13
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: February 09, 2005 00:46 CST
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Oops, my bad...Inu does have his sword. (Jeez, how'd I miss that?) -- Kagome attempting to kill herself after everything that has happened to her in a less than 3 day period makes perfect sense. She's been battered, bludgeoned, sliced and almost diced. Top it off with the emotional devastation of losing Houjo, losing her world, and almost losing her mind...I'd say she has had quite enough angst. I was surprised at InuYasha offering to kill her himself even if he did vow to make her change her mind. As fast as things are developing between the two, I believe that instinct is playing a big part. But there comes a time when 'thought' must take over for there to be something more solid to build a future on. -- Great chapter. (see, not once did I mention 'typos'...LoL)
| Title: Made it to chapter 12...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: February 09, 2005 00:03 CST
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Finally! I think there's a conspiricy trying to keep me from reading this...every time I pull it up, something happens...I even had explorer crash on me once! --- Wow, you sure are having fun with your AU. Sesshoumaru is being decent, Kouga is a pal, an Evil Hojou (no 'kun' for this creep! LOL) and now Sango and Miroku are making out! Yup...you are having lots of fun mixing things up. Hehe. -- I do hope that there will be a little more background about how they came all to be together with InuYasha and why Sess isn't trying to beat the crap outta his little bro this time around. Enquiring minds want to know... I also noticed that Yash-kun doesn't have Tessaiga yet. I'm sure that will be remedied soon. (Tessaiga kicks a-...tail!!) Now the Shikon no Tama has been shattered and we all know what that means. --- I am enjoying this story. I didn't want you to think I had forgotten it, LOL. -- Well, onward!!
| Title: Finished Ch. 4
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: January 29, 2005 00:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting story so far. I like the premise. Your characters are doing alright but I think that things are happening a little too fast though. ---- It takes time to trust people, even when you don't have much choice. Yes, they are helping Kagome, but she still doesn't know who any of them are, where she is or when. (but that hasn't been explored yet, lol) ---- I agree that; Yes, Sango seemed to be really talkative with Kagome, again, a total stranger to her as well. I think that things could be explored a little more. ---Well, long day today, longer one tomorrow...me is soooo tired. I will get to the rest a.s.a.p. - Ja!
| Title: Fateful Night
Reviewed By: trinity757575@yahoo.com On: December 07, 2004 18:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so far, and your a wonderful writer so ease up on yourself okay? and don't worry about grammer mistake, heck, i'm not that great with spelling myself..hehehe, i understand the story without any trouble, brain kicks in with the right word..so no worries =). so please keep up with the great job your doing, and i can't wait to read the next chapter. I have you on my favorite arthur list so i won't miss it, and I'd like to leave you with a little saying from "Annie" "The sun'll come out...tomorrow, betcha bottom dollar there'll be sun. So, lift up your chin, an grin....oh the sun'll come out tomorrow...=) Sorry if it's out of tune, not a very good singer either. -.@. So, intel next chappie, I'll be reading yeah, trinity.
| Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, i love this story, great job, keep up the good work! :)
| Title: wow!
Reviewed By: mybyrdy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all i can say is wow. what an excellent and compelling chapter- my heart was in my throat at the end, i was so worried. you have a gift for gripping writing- keep it up. great job and as always, a loyal reader and reviewer is blown away. until next review, byrdy
| Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 23:34 CDT
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'Good story! Thanks for sharing it with us and I hope you update soon!
| Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did good, keep the chapters comming! >@
| Reviewed By: Inu-Taiyoukai_6501 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 23:30 CDT
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pretty pretty pleeeeaaase UPDATE......i have been waiting for the next chapter(s) for like 6 whole weeks or something around that! ::pants::.....^_^;;
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