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Reviewed By: Geno On: October 01, 2004 09:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so awesome! I can't remember reading a better story. There's drama, action, adventure, romance, and all the rest. It's a great all around good story.
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Title: :( up...up...up...update
Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uploaded On: September 22, 2004 09:55 EDT | Updated On: September 25, 2004 Pages: 5 | Words: 4665 | Size: 25 KB | Visits: 146 | Status: Completed hmm i love it but it said it was done gdmit grrr huff (startsc crying!) waaahh please update please puppy dog eyes)
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Title: great job!
Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 01:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, keep it comming, could not stop reading! loved it A++++++++++++
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Title: YAYNESS!!
Reviewed By: Star keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Total Yayness!! I've yet to come across a Miroku/Sango lemon or lime, and I think that this is total yayness!! *snaps on goggles* *chucks confetti into the air* YAYNESS!! (the goggles are so the damned confetti doesn't blind me) UPDATE SOON!! DOMO ARIGATO!! YAYNESS AGAIN!! Huggles and cookies all around!! and roses! the thornless kind! (so no one gets hurt) YAYNESS!! I like that word! YAYNESS!! ~~~Starlett~~~
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Reviewed By: Inu-Taiyoukai_6501 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 18:10 CDT
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Hey, nice fic and Sango and Miroku were smoochin' ehehehehehe. Hmmm.... will Inuyasha and Kagome smooch in the later chaps... I WANNA KNOW WAT HAPPENS. UPGRADE SOON... i wish i was in Japan for my summer vacation but its too late now. i hate school because it sucks like hell. LoL.
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 21:26 CDT
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*er-hem* I have one a few things to say. First, don't have contractions in the narration if you can help it. When in first person, it's okay to let one or two slip by, but when in thrid perosn, it's never a good idea. ////////// Second: If you're writing in english, stay in english. Some words are okay not to translate. Suffixs, words like Youkai, youki, ki, jaki, chakra, jitsu, Shikon no Tama etc. However, when talking about the jewl, and reffering to it as (the)jewl, use the word jewl. Not tama. Don't use words like diajobu (I don't know how to spell it), demo, matte, itai, iie, hai, onee, nee-chan, nii-chan(and other forms) urusai, or basically anything that you can say in english. Do you know why? Because it makes your writing look immature. Sometimes it's funny to have Kagome call Inuyasha a baka. But when you're writing in english, there is no need to have random japanese words tossed in. Your stories are not for you to say "Look see how many japanese words I know!" Alot of people don't appreciate fangirl japanese in stories and won't even read past a "Kawaii" when they see one.
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Title: Great CHappie
Reviewed By: Kates On: September 17, 2004 18:26 CDT
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Great chapter I really liked it! I don't want Hojo to come back, but I have to admit bringing him back again would make an interesting twist in the plot. I hoope to see another chapter soon! Keep up the fantastic work, and please please please update as soon as possible!!!!
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Reviewed By: marta178 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fanfic!! Hope you update sonner that the other time ;P keep writing it, i can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: mybyrdy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 11:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, what a powerful chapter. it made time fly by last night reading, i was so envelloped in the action and the emotion. I admit i started again from the begining just so everything was fresh in my mind, but i was still blown away, and when i looked back at the clock, it was already 2am. thankyou so much for the dedication, it really means alot that youre even reading my story- since it looks like noone else is. im trying to make it as interesting as i can, and now that i know youre reading, and how wonderful a writer you are, ill be sure to soup it up and make it great. until next update, mybyrdy 0.o
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Reviewed By: shymiko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 23:36 CDT
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I love your story!!! Please update soon ^.^ Shy
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Reviewed By: snowecat On: August 01, 2004 20:28 CDT
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Akk!! Evil wench!! This is a wonderful story! You still need to watch your spelling, it makes it a little confusing to read sometimes. I wonder how Kagome is going to explain Hojo's death in the modern times.
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: July 30, 2004 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great story.Great chapter too! Love this story. It's Muy interestante'! Not sure if thats a real spanish word or not. so maybe I just made it up. hehe. But yea,love the story, love how it's developing. Can't wait to read more. Hope you feel better soon!
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Reviewed By: lj On: July 29, 2004 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
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I enjoyed your story this is the way it should of started to me dont worry that you didn't spell everything right it happens i hope you aren't done with it yet please update it
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Title: I can't see my reviews
Reviewed By: growling author [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 21:15 CDT
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Sorry if this is the 2nd review form my self but this page won't go away so I'm trying something to get it to leave gomen
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Reviewed By: IceYoukaiEnchantress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait till the next chapter!! so far yur fic is really good and don't worry about spelling i do it all the tyme!!! i hope u update soon!!! Ja ^_^!!!
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