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| "Steam, A Lemon Interlude" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: Kai-chan Akiyama On: April 04, 2006 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Gods, that was hot! I'm reading "Anything's Possble" on fanfiction write now but I had to see the lemon. You have more lemony goodness, right? I hope so, Gods... I never even thought of the sex they could have in the same body, that's a great concept. And you pulled it off so well, Gods! *still a bit shocked* Hey look, the "characters left" number changes, neat! *distracted* Ha, go lower, lower, I say! Anyway yus, hot sex, woohoo! ~*KA*~
| Reviewed By: breal_blood_demon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 15:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome fic! i so hope that you put another chappie onto this fic. i totally agree with the other people that reviewed for this fic. its really good. keep up the good writing.
| Reviewed By: paniwi (to lazy to log in) On: February 18, 2005 11:11 CST
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Whoah, this is so good, it's about the fifth time I've read tis. Sorry for not reviewing, stupid mm.org wouldn't let me *_*. Anyway, I totally loved it. I love the way Ryou and Bakura handle eachother (not just the sex, the way they talk to eachother and stuff)There should be more of this stuff around, you should write one where Bakura finally has his own body, even for just 90 days (yes I've read Anyting's possible too). I'm really surprised this fic has only 6 reviews now, it's worth so much more!
| Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 02:16 CST
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*Lets out an astonished breath*. WOW. That is all I can think of to say for this fic! It was amazing, I love how you describe the interaction between the spirit and Ryou! This was simply beautiful and well done! *Rushes off to read Anything's Possible*.
| Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress (not logged in) On: September 19, 2004 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Mmm, lemony. *drools* J/k, I don't drool. ^_^ hehe. Very interesting. See ya around.
| Reviewed By: Yahriel On: July 29, 2004 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Friend linked me to this... and YUM! I love it! @_@ Quite a bit of drooling and such. I haven't seen this kind of Yami/Hikari "sex" before. Hey, where can we find SilverFoxfire's pic? *_*
| Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 16:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yuuummy... *wipes away drool* Love it!!
| Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 17:56 CDT
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Yummy. I can't wait until Bakura finally gets his own body. I wonder if he'll be able to do some silencing spells.(on the room. I always think off Ryou as a screamer.)
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