Title: Dun, dun, dun! Reviewed By: Sleep Remedy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 19:06 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh my! Raoul is all fired up, again, I see. This does not bode well for the poor little Riki. However, I did like to see Iason finally lower himself to Riki's level a little and actually treat him like a lover. You're very good at writing out their slowly developing relationship! They've come a long way from before. Can't wait to read the rest. Much love, Sleepy.
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