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Reviewed By: Hiroto [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 10:34 CDT
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YAAAAY!!! I love you forever for updating this!! (Easy to please, aren't I? ...>_>) *sniffle* But so short...T-T I shouldn't be talking though... >_< Update soon~
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Reviewed By: Hiroto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 10:23 CDT
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...>_>... WHEN are you going to update this?! You cannot, I repeat, CANNOT leave us with a cliffy like that!! Please....T-T onegai...UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: Dark_lites [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
noticed a few grammar errors, 'eh? Have to point it out. Not only am I an anime/manga junkie but I have a serious language issue. A very lethel combo if I do say so my self, at least if it is used in the correct manner. But I liked the story and I am also glad to hear that you are continuing it. How could you just leave us with a cliff hanger like that? Exactally you couldn't. Hence the reason of your return. I know this is a long message but I think it is nessicary to say all of my pointless random, nonsense and get it out of the way. Ja ne! ~~*~~ Dark_lites
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Reviewed By: Mortem [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really good, it sucks that you have no inspiration right now. D: Oh well, I hope you find some soon and update! (Not trying to push you into it)
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Title: Hiroto
Reviewed By: Hiroto [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 02:41 CST
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This is really really good! And since Neiji ics aren't all that common, this is a refreshing new point!
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Reviewed By: joann On: November 22, 2004 01:42 CST
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i like it! update soon please!
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Title: ch. 5
Reviewed By: kya)jaganshi On: November 21, 2004 17:13 CST
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gasp she she she swhe she she she she she.. something.. i forgot. hehe. keep udpating!!
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Reviewed By: TapTap-san [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 17:59 CDT
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=3 This is good so far, and I wish you much luck with high school. It's not easy but you get used to it. ^^; I know, I'm in my junior year. Anyhow, the last chapter was great, I liked it more then the other two. But I guess I'm a sucker for things about how people interact with each other. Hehe. ^^ Good job and I hope you're able to work on this soon.
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Reviewed By: TapTap-san [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 17:51 CDT
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^^ This is well-written and yay! My only problem is that I dont know who anyone is but that's my fault for not watching Naruto. Also the part where you said that thing about the tension being so thick you couldn't scratch it with a knife...it's a bit cliched, isn't it? But otherwise this is a very interesting read. I want to know whats going on with the Neji-ness!
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Reviewed By: TapTap-san [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 17:26 CDT
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Ahhh I like this a lot so far. ^^ You pull off the all-dialogue style really well. I shall read the next chapter now!
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Reviewed By: DreamAnimeKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 08:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really feeling this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: kya jaganshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!!! u updated!!!! yay!! but it was kinda short tho... keep updating!
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Title: ..
Reviewed By: kya jaganshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was no problem reviewing. its my job... well not really... i dun really hav a job.. hehe well keep updating!
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Reviewed By: kya jaganshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 03:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wen r u gonna update?!??!? please hurry!!!!
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Title: your requested review
Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm so sorry it took me so long to review your fics! *mushroom could sigh thingy and an anime sweatdrop* so many fics to review so little time. anyway, it's interesting so far. i didn't notice any spelling or grammar mistakes so that gets a 10. it was also kinda attention grabbing but since there was only 2 chapters there wasn't much to rate for creativity so i'm giving it an 8 so far. but once you get more chapters it will probably jump to 10. the enjoyment rating was the same way so it gets an 8 as well. averaged out that's a high nine, like a 9 and a half. but simce that's not a option (obviously) i had to put just 9. update soon and you can expect a new review from me! ^_~
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