| "The Reason" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 14:53 CDT
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I really liked this. I like the sequel even better. Ihope Bakura finds himslef and comes back to a ?pregnant? Ryou. Wouldn't that be a treat.
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 08:48 CDT
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cute ending, nice lemon, well written with emotions, sweet
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 02:46 CST
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Well, that was an interesting little fanfic... I prety much enjoyed it... Until the bit with Yami... They just seemed too overly friendly with each other... Than and Bakura proposing to Ryou was a little out landish for me... And the way you wrote the story didn't exactly make that part fit... He had never admited to loving Ryou before, and when he did tell him he left befor the boy could answer.. SO why would he go and buy a ring? Perhaps if you had made him leave then come back and had the two of them spend time together... But it just didn't seeem to make sense the way you had it penned out in your story... All in all though it was a pretty good fic and those are the only real qualms I had with it.
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Reviewed By: ShElL101 On: October 14, 2004 19:38 CDT
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write a sequel!!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 16:31 CDT
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*wipes away drool and tears* Very yummy and lovely, but sad when Bakura leaves. I wouldn't mind seeing a short chapter or something about when Bakura comes back and Ryou marries him. Ja ne!
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