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| "Untitled but really funny story" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: IYYYHPinay27 (not logged on) On: July 29, 2004 13:53 CDT
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About my pairing, it's Jin from Yu Yu Hakusho. Did I add that? Ok, now I'm really done. See you soon!
| Title: My character if you want her
Reviewed By: IYYYHPinay27 (not logged in) On: July 29, 2004 13:51 CDT
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Name: Ayume Kiraya Age: 16 Sex: Female Hair: Waist length black hair that is kept down with a few pieces of hair braided Eyes: Black Outfits: #1 Black and red kimono decorated with dragons that is cut in two pieces; a short top and a skirt #2 A black army print tank top with khaki pants and a chain belt Personality: Likes to poke fun at people, but knows when to stop and be serious Always with a smile on her face, she's almost always calm She is quiet and is always the peacemaker between friends She is smart and knows how to strategize for things, whether it be battle or trying to figure out a way to make Naruto shut up She has a sort of "little sister" personality Paired with: Jin Abilities: Able to create fire and weapons made of fire at will, is trained to use throwing stars, daggers, and bow and arrow. History: Parents are demons, she lives in Ningenkai, but visits the Makai often. Has many siblings and she is the oldest. Thanks for considering my OC!
| Title: Oh oops...
Reviewed By: Anime-fangirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 02:55 CDT
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Forgot to add, her hair is long, usually let down, pulled back by a blue headband or that forehead protecter thing, or up in a ponytail. ^^ Sorry...as you can see, I'm a bit new on the Naruto thing...ehehe.
| Title: Uh...can I join?
Reviewed By: Anime-fangirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 02:52 CDT
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Name: Mayko Shimizu Age: 15 Gender: Female Hair: Violet Eyes: Blue/Violet mixture Outfits: 1) Just like Sakura's only the top japanese/chinese shirt thingy is more of a bluish/violet color 2) Blue cotton shirt, black velvet pants, black tennis shoes and blue and black fingerless gloves Personality: A really calm person, always happy, and a bit on the slow side Paired w/: Sasuke, Naruto, Kurama, OC or single (Don't really care) Abilities: Cleverness, speed, jumps pretty high and scares people with her always happy personality (^^) History (Optional): Doesn't really know much about her past, that's why she's usually calm and happy. She doesn't really mind that she doesn't know much about her past because she always had this feeling that maybe something bad happened to her and she wouldn't want to remember it. Extra Info: She's really best with stelth, anything sharp (daggers, swords, etc) and the fact she LOVES to scare people with her always happy personaily. She can be a bit childish at times like prank a few people but she's can be mature for her age. ~*Good luck with this story and I hope I'm picked!*~ ^^
| Title: pleez let me in your fic!!
Reviewed By: Kai the Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 21:13 CDT
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Name: Kai Habits: Late sleeper,he likes to kill himself, but he has never succeeded. age:15 abilities: Left Eye sharingan, right eye byakugan. Demonic Ice Mirrors. Dressed: Sasuke's shirt, his headband tied on his knee like shinguard. raggedy jeans. Gender: male History: raised by gangsters in the water country, is related to Haku in some way, and wants to kill Sasuke. Favorite food: grapes and orange juice. and Airheads! Other info: Kakashi's books, he likes to steal them and alter them by drawing...well yeah. Looks: Shoulder length dark blue/black hair, really really pale and sunburns easily. Please update soon!
| Title: pleez let me in your fic!!
Reviewed By: Kai the Avenger On: July 28, 2004 15:42 CDT
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Name: Kai Habits: Late sleeper,he likes to kill himself, but he has never succeeded. age:15 abilities: Left Eye sharingan, right eye byakugan. Demonic Ice Mirrors. Dressed: Sasuke's shirt, his headband tied on his knee like shinguard. raggedy jeans. Gender: male History: raised by gangsters in the water country, is related to Haku in some way, and wants to kill Sasuke. Favorite food: grapes and orange juice. and Airheads! Other info: Kakashi's books, he likes to steal them and alter them by drawing...well yeah. Looks: Shoulder length dark blue/black hair, really really pale and sunburns easily. Please update soon!
| Reviewed By: I would really like to be in your story, if posible On: July 27, 2004 22:34 CDT
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Name: Ang Age: 23 Sex: Female Hair: Cherry Blond, with a short boyish hair cut. Eyes: Dark Blue Outfits: Long Black T-shirt says "Normal People Scare Me", Dark, faded blue-jens. Plan sniker. Personality: Reserved, and cold when in larg crowld, but friendly, kind, witty and loveing in small friendly cricles. When provoked is aggressive, and will tell everyone how it is. She has a very short temper, that she can not control at times. Paired with anyone from YYH or Naruto: Koenma from YYH or Gara from Naruto Abilities: Anger blast. Can give out an blast of energy, that can crush, smash, or desolve anything it tuches or comes into contate with. But this energy is uncontrolbe, and unproditable, Ang her-self can not control it, when she loses her temper. Ang also has the abilitie to see in the dark. History (optional): Ang is the youngest of two brothers and one sisters. There is nothing really spichle about her, other than her destrutive abilitie, when she loses her temper. Extra Info: Has to ware sun-glass when in a bright lited area, day or night. She is very loyle to her friends and family. She lives by one role, "Stay out of her way, and you will live to see morrning."
| Title: yay
Reviewed By: Heeroschibiangel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name:Angel Age:16 Sex:f Hair:blue/black Eyes:same as sasuke's Outfits:simaler to gaara's Personality:sweet yet feirce when it comes to those i love. Paired with anyone from YYH or Naruto:Gaara (naruto) Abilities:sand/copy ninja History (optional): Extra Info:fave food is strawberries.also wears a charm bracelet with a single flame charm on right wrist.on the charm is gaara's name with his nick name on the other side. Panda*lol*
| Title: pick me, if I'm not too serious..
Reviewed By: LavanderScent On: July 27, 2004 13:55 CDT
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Name:Aliya(ali) Age:14 Sex:female Hair: wavy chestnut with auburn streaks that reaches mid- back, small cat ears just barely visable. Eyes:brown with gold flecks. Outfits: black jeans and a form- fitting blood red t- shirt that says 'all stressed out and no one to choke.' she also wears black boots and lots of those thin elastic bracelets.(umm, I guess I need more than one)jade green halter top that says 'I am not A bitch, I am THE bitch' and baggy, cargo capri pants with a green dew-rag over her hair. Personality: she has a huge temper and can sometimes be quite the bitch! She could definently be considered the smart one, and she spends a lot of her time thinking of sarcastic comments. If all of this sounds too serious, I'll tell you her fatal flaw, PIXIE STIX!!! she can get seriously hyper and high off pixie stix, then she's kind of fun! Paired with anyone from YYH or Naruto: preferably Hiei, yusuke, teenage koenma, or Touya Abilities: demon speed as well as strength. She can also have little visions once in a while, as well as the usual demon claws and fangs. Extra Info: she is a neko (cat demon) and therefore DOES NOT like water or anything wet.
| Reviewed By: howlingwolff On: July 27, 2004 07:59 CDT
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Name:Kira Fushita Age:15 Gender:Female Hair:Long red(in a ponytail). Eyes:Ruby Outfits:A short black dress(comes to about midthigh)with small slits, a white scarf tied around her neck so it flows when she walks/runs, and black boots that come a little over her ankle. Personality:She is sweet and nice towards friends and family, but merciless and cold towards enemies. Paired with:Hiei Abilities:Move with blinding speed(like Hiei) and can use fire-based attacks. Weopons:Two daggers and shurikens. Extra Info:She is a ninja. For more info, my email is pichu457@yahoo.com
| Reviewed By: Kitsune_Kyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 03:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name:Kitsune Kyo Age: 14 Sex: Female Hair: Waist length, icy blue Eyes:icy blue Outfits: white chinese blouse with light blue trimmings and a matching skirt, blue slippers Personality: calm and reserved, but is kind a caring for friend but cold hearted to enemies. Paired with anyone from YYH or Naruto: Sasuke, if not Touya Abilities: Controls ice and snow, immune to any type of poison and uses poison, and can control illusions Extra Info: Pale skin tone and can't think of anything more need anything email me at hino_mina@yahoo.com
| Reviewed By: Darkstar51 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 23:58 CDT
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Name:Ryoko Kudou Age:15 Sex:female Hair:shoulder lenght black hair tipped blue Eyes:gold Outfits:blue tank top, black pants, army boots,blue wrist bands and a black bandana Paired with anyone from YYH or Naruto:Youko Kurama(though she keeps on saying that she hates Youko) Abilities:telepathy,black flame,ability to fly,has a scythe History (optional):has a twin brother who was killed by the 'King of thieves' Youko Kurama and was abandoed by her parents one of the best thieves in the Makai
| Title: hn
Reviewed By: dark fox Ryouko On: July 26, 2004 19:58 CDT
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Name:Ryouko Ishiyama Age:17 Sex:female Hair:short silver Eyes:sky blue Outfits:blue and black fighting outfit (like genkais) and a black headband Personality:loner most of the time, u have to earn her trust and/or respect, somewhate nice to those she trusts cold toward those she does not. Paired with anyone from YYH or Naruto:HIEI!! Abilities:telepathy, lavitation,speed History (optional):her father killed her mother then tried to kill her younger sister. she took her sister and ran away, met a wold demon pack, and left her with them. then she went back and killed her father and since then she has been living on her own training and fighting.
| Title: Can i join?
Reviewed By: Green Breeze [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 17:40 CDT
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Can i join?? Name:Green Age:14 Sex:female Hair:Dark brown Eyes:Orange Outfits:green tank top with blue jeans and black and red shoes (2)A green tank top with blue capi's.She has black wrap thinges that go to her wrist.( you know like hiei wears on his one arm) Personality:nice, friendly once you get to know her Paired with:you can choose.( as long as it is'nt Kuwabara) History: Her parents died when she was 11 Extra Info:contrals lighting, has speed,uses bow and arrows and chain sickle.Also a black wolf demon. Thanx for your time! ^^
| Title: Please let me be in your story!!!!!
Reviewed By: Angel Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 17:16 CDT
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Name:Angel,Age:same as Hiei's because we are twins,Gender:Female,Hair:black,Eyes:Crimson,Outfits:(1)long-sleeve Black shirt that says 'I am Death'in red,black jeans and boots(2)short-sleeve black shirt that says'Burn'in white flames,a black skirt and black high-heeled boots,Personality:a mix of Hiei's and Yukina's,Paired with:Yusuke,Abilities:fire and ice attacks,can talk telepathicaly(sp?)to Hiei and Yusuke,Weapons:Katana,daggers,sharp weapons, History:She and her brother are known as the Forbidden Children.If you need anything else you can email me at iceswan17@hotmail.com.Please Pick Me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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