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| "Untitled but really funny story" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 > » ] | Title: pick me!
Reviewed By: Narutofan6 On: April 16, 2005 18:27 CDT
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name:Kinoko age:15 sex:girl hair:long brown hair eyes:sky blue outfits:dark blue capris, black sleveless shirt, black sneakers, blue fingerless gloves Personality:tough, fearless, and crazy as well as playful and funloving she will do what ever it takes to defend her friends pairing:I would like either Hiei or Naruto please Extra Info:owns a black bowstaff that can change into a katana Please pick me no one likes to feel left out
| Title: Ummm.... Hi
Reviewed By: ? On: February 26, 2005 22:06 CST
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Name:Quartzy(short for Courtney Age:general age of everyone else gender:female hair:golden stright goes to butt eyes:green with flecks of gold clothes:jeans and a sweatshirt personality:stuborn devious caring trickster but deadly and sreious when need be paired with:Hiei abilitys:quick to learn,hacks,exellent fighter, handles all powers history:orphan beaten by stepparents untill ran away Extra info:hates dresses and skirts with a passion, loves sweet snow, very sarcastic, will always stand up for a friend, will not take any insults to her and will most likly beat them up. PLEASE CHOOSE MY CHARECTOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! p.s I wasn't sure if you were supposed to e-mail it to you or not.
| Reviewed By: jigglinyellowjello (jiggly) On: December 09, 2004 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Name:Ciera (u make up last name) Age:24 Sex:female Hair:black w/ goldishbrown highlights Eyes:dark brown or crimson Outfits:tanktop (preferably black or silver) Black baggy pants, kinda like Kakashi's Personality:loner/ (yusuke/hiei combo) Paired with anyone from YYH or Naruto:Kakashi!!! Abilities:Control dead/shadows/fear History (optional):Close friends w/ yondaime & Kakashi. Clan was close to Kakashi's. Clan was destroyed. Stayed away from others. Extra Info:
| Reviewed By: silver_neko_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 19:22 CST
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(Name)Tsuki Fushin ~nickname: Junsui~ (Age)14 (Gender)Female (Hair)2 purple strands that are in 2 small braids, rest of hair is black, tied up in a pony tail thats put up with a clip (Eyes) Light purple w/ violet specks (Outfit) sleeveless kimono top that black and red, dress thats black and purple w/ a cut on one side starting from below the thigh to the bottom, dark purple fingerless gloves that reach elbows (Personality)Can be distant when thinking about past, vicious when fighting, normally happy, death glares when cranky, sometimes coldly formal (Paired w/)Naruto/Sasuke/Neji(that was in order) (Abilities)jutsus, uses dao, very good at taijutsu, can read minds/have preminitions (History)Her dad was incinerated in a fire, her mother carried her to Konoha before she died of a wound and smoke inhalation. She'll occasionally have a nightmare about the fire. (Extra Info) She can REALLY scare people with her death glare, she LoVeS ramen, and can put on a VERY innocent act
| Reviewed By: kenrbow2191 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 15:50 CDT
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i need help how do you save your story so you can come back later contact me search kenrbow2191 and just review mine and ill get it
| Title: im good for the book but i need help on my story
Reviewed By: kenrbow On: September 20, 2004 15:06 CDT
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hey my nick name is orion. one character in your book can be Ty just like me he is: white brown hair (spiky) blue eyes (kinda silver) male he has goggles or sunglasses above his eyes he has a necklace that is a cross he wears ninja style clothes he is a funny, some times serious,mostly wierd and funny (most jokes are kinda corny) i have lived in japan for three years when i was nine months to four years, i later moved to arkansas , then in my parents dicorce, me and my mom moved down to mississippi, and my dad moved to alaska. and in mississippi i got in touch with collecting sowrds and skateboarding. thats about all i can really tell you but if you can put me in your story ill be glad to help you in your story or just to give ideas i will contact again in another review
| Title: HI O!!!!!
Reviewed By: kuro_mirai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 04:33 CDT
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well here's my oc hope ya like if not thats ok! Good luck with the story even if i'm not in it ^_^ (Name:) Kuro Mirai (Age:)14 (Sex:) Female (Hair:) Black with silver tips up in a high ponytail (Eyes:) silver (Outfits:) Dark blue shirt that says "You laugh at me for being different i laugh at you for being the same" with a black coat over it, with dark blue jeans. (Personality:) sarcastic, serious, some times come's off as cold, but she can be nice but that is rare VARY rare (Paired with:) Garra, Sasuke, Hiei (dont care) (Abilities:) can see in dark and create shilds/barriers (History optional): unone (Extra Info:) has a scar on her back shaped like a x
| Title: PICK ME!!!!! pls!
Reviewed By: Metaliczgal On: August 27, 2004 23:53 CDT
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Name: Yuko Age:14 Sex:Female Hair:Long n black w/dark blue highlights Eyes:amethyst Outfits: baggy blue t-shirt w/ cream white skirt Personality: Bubbly,Makulit(sorry i dun know the einglish of it aha! it's naughty),Happy-go-lucky Paired with anyone from YYH or Naruto: Sasuke(Naruto) Abilities: can perform extremely high jutsus (ex. grandfireball no jutsu) History (optional): Extra Info: I cuss a lot
| Reviewed By: rose0804 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 01:22 CDT
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name: Rose age: 13 sex: female hair: long raven black hair. eyes: blue and green outfits: A black tantop with blue and golden tiger on it with a dark green baggy pants reaching her knees. personality: cheerful, care-free, but gets really scary when mad. pairing: Sasuke Abilities: She could controll cats,tigers,lions, cat-realated creacher. History: Came from a unknown clan who could controll the cats. But sent to the hidden leaf to learn more.Hokage-sama's friend's sister's daughter. But finds out that her clan was wiped out by snakemaru. Dosen't go near Shino or Kiba because they have bugs and dogs.
| Reviewed By: Kitsune gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 21:39 CDT
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PLEASE CHOOSE ME!!! IF YOU CHOOSE ME I'LL WRITE A FANFIC ABOUT YOU AND KAKASHI!!!!!PLEASE CHOOSE ME!!!
| Reviewed By: Kitsune gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 21:38 CDT
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Name: Tila Hakaru Fujiwara Age: 13 Sex: female Hair: shoulder length blonde with hotpink and black streaks Eyes: purple Outfits: 1} kaki cargo capris, a black t-shirt wtih a longsleeve fishnet shirt under it, and dark blue nikes 2} red and black oriental dress with high slits, black flared slacks, and black stilletios 3} dark denim flared jeans, a black halter top, a hotpink tube top that goes over the halter, black converses, and hotpink and black armwarmers 4} you decide Personality:happy,loud, funny,smart,sly,strong,good liar,cute,tombuy/punk, and wild Paired with anyone from YYH or Naruto: Sasuke,Naruto,Yoko,Yusuke, or single Abilities:same as Sasuke,Kakashi,Kurama,Yusuke, and Naruto History (optional):Is Kakashi's niece Extra Info:Is Kuwabara's stepsister
| Title: I'm probably late or don't stand a chance, but oh well...
Reviewed By: midnight_tear [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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NAME: Amaya Takani AGE: 18 SEX: Female HAIR: Reachs the middle of Amaya's back, straight. It's dark brown, with two white streaks right on the front. EYES: Acid green. OUTFIT: A pair of loose black pants and a black chinese shirt, which has a white tiger right on the middle PERSONALITY: Amaya is a loner, but despite the fact she likes to be alone with her thoughts, she always appears when someone is in need. Amaya likes to make people smile, even when she isn't feeling to happy herself (she hates seeing people sad, just like she hates to talk about her own problems). Amaya is very independent and responsible. Paired with: (he's probably been choosen) Hiei, if not, Amaya can be alone. ABILITIES: Amaya as the vision and agility of an wolf. She can also use swords, daggers and a bow. HISTORY: Amaya's parents died when she was only 6, by a group of angry humans (yup, she's half demon just like her parents were.) and Amaya ran to Makai, where she faced the fate of growing all by herself. Amaya became a car-racer (on Earth), because it was the easy way to find money to survive (but Amaya lived in Makai). And, to protect herself, Amaya learnt how to use the sword, the dagger and the bow. EXTRA: Amaya is always wearing a silver chain, which as a white rose as a pendant. It had belonged to her mother (who recieved it from Amaya's father as a gift). --- In case you need more information, just e-mail me. Good luck with your fic!
| Title: I BEG YOU!!!
Reviewed By: kawaii_kunoichi05 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 08:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Kari Asekawa Age:13 Sex:f Hair:violet, she wears in a low ponytail with bangs on her face Eyes:mint green Outfits:sleeveless midnight blue turtleneck, blue skirt which stops just above the knee with a blue short underneath. Personality:lively, always likes training, and always asking others for battle which gets her into trouble sometimes Paired with anyone from YYH or Naruto: NEJI OR GAARA!!!!! Abilities: the Asekawa death stance: a graceful dance while chakra strings come out from her fingertips encircles the victim's heart, then when the dance finishes, the strings suddenly tighten killing the victim. she only uses this in serious battles, if not she only uses her two katanas History (optional): clan massacred, i dont know why she is still happy after that tragedy, maybe she just hides her real feelings. Extra Info:hmm... has the tendency to kiss someone if they get to noisy and wouldnt listen to her when she says shut up. (only to guys) she does this so that the person would shut up. (to girls) she slaps them on the cheek. hehehe PLZZZZ CHOOSE ME!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Larka Sikla [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 14:38 CDT
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Name: Maki Chui. Age:15. Sex: Female (no duh.) Hair: Black. Eyes:Sapphire Outfits: A tanktop saying "Your lips are moving, but all I hear is BLAH BLAH BLAH!" and black shorts. Personality: Always calm and never loses her cool. She hates people who think girls are weak, and hates girls that ARE weak. Paired with: Hiei!!! This is my number one choice! If not...Touya or Jin... Abilities: Fire of Hell, Hailing Fire (a storm of fire), telekinese(she can read minds and levitate/throw things around with her mind), Fire Strike (her katana is wrapped in flames), and Flaming Tornado. History: Her clan killed her parents (no idea why) and they shunned her away and she was trained to kill by assassins. Extra Info: She has black dragon wings. She is a Fire/Psychic Demon. She uses a bow and arrow and a katana. She as quick as Hiei and controls fire. Thanks! I hope you chose me! These things are always fun!
| Title: pick me!!!!!
Reviewed By: nikanaru (too lazy to log-in) On: July 30, 2004 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Kio Sekozawa~ Age: 14~ Sex: im a gurl~ Hair:medium short dark blue hair~ Eyes: royal blue eyes~ Outfits:A navy blue sleeveless tank top and a pair of knee high cream-colored cargo pants. Her Konoha forehead protector is tied around her forehead wears a pair of blue ninja sandals and a pair of black fingerless gloves.~ Personality: Kio is a very noisy and naughty girl. She is a cheerful, careless, has a child-like attitude and gets bored when it's comes to studying. She dosent show her soft part or whatsoever.... but does realy have one Paired with anyone from YYH or Naruto: SASUKE!~ Abilities: all types of jutsus (weapon: Katar)~ Extra Info: alwasy being teased by everyone... but is a good sport... sometimes?~
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