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| "Pinch Me" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny! It's SOOOOOOO CUUUUTE!!! I dunno, Bakura could be shy and cute and nonviolent, I think. But he was still crazy! Yay!
| Title: meepu
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHH AHAHAHHAHA.. heh, Bakura is silly. Lol.. he soaked the poor kitty. Once, I poped a water balloon on my shirt, near my heart, during winter, or fall. I forget, but it was chilly outside, and my mom yelled at me! Ryou is like a mom, and a damn good one at that! Go Ryou! I love it when Bakura is so OOC, it's adorable ^^ However, I love his evil ass, sadistic side a lot too XD
| Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat On: August 22, 2004 23:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
*gets up from the concrete floor.* Ow...About the fic...in a word, hilarious! Obviously I fell out out of my chair because I laughed so hard...*wipes away tears of laughter* I loved it!
| Reviewed By: LadyGrey On: July 27, 2004 04:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was very, very kawaii. There are quite a lot of B/R stories out there, but for a cute little one-shot humorous laugh-out-loud piece, this has got to be one of the best I've ever read. I'm saving it. You're also a very good writer, and using correct grammer/etc. is really important to readability. I'll be looking into more of your fiction now -- ja ne! Write more cute stories!
| Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 18:26 CDT
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Bakura was sorta OOC some of the time, but not really. I thought it was cute/sweet/funny. I thnk I'm going to go bug my mom to buy mint icecream now...
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