| "Sin's of the Father" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: kalefox On: September 18, 2005 11:20 CDT
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As I promised, I have read the story thus far. Yes, you were right in saying that this chapter is short, and I myself did not like how it ended..but if you say pushing it would have messed the next chapter up..I believe you and hope the next chapter lives up to my expectations of what you can provide...I'm sure you can do better. I have enjoyed this story though and am anxious to read more. It is interesting how you came about this way of thinking..I myself never would have thought of having Sesshoumaru actually deal the last blow to Sakura, but you seemed to have pulled it off. I can't help but wonder though, how you intend to bring the two together..I know you have made Inuyasha's horrble reality become a little more than dreams ..and I guess you could tilt that in Sesshoumaru's favor,but I'll doubt you'll do that..it's too expected, well that's how I see it anyway.. I'm surprised one fic author could hold my attenton for so long...but again you have pulled it off..post the next chapters and soon..I'd like to see where this leads.. -tai
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Reviewed By: 026 On: November 13, 2004 05:13 CST
Comment/Review:
YOU MUST UPDATE PLEASE
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Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 12:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This will be an awesome story when it's all done, I can tell. You give a wonderful insight as to why perhaps our beloved Sesshomaru is so quite in the anime seris... and I must say that it at least makes sence. It's an interesting opinion, one that I like and would very much enjoy to follow as you continue to update. Keep up the good work and I promise that you'll see a review for every new chapter you post. Love it tons, Kinoko
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Reviewed By: x_x_Sesshoumaru_x_x [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 00:52 CDT
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*Eyes fill with tears* Oh....How sweet! InuYasha helping HIS Sesshy. So cute! Continue, I am really likin' it! (But you knew that already, didn't you? ^.~)
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 07:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOW
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Reviewed By: darkdemon11 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 07:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice.
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Reviewed By: x_x_Sesshoumaru_x_x [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 03:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG....That is SO sad. Poor lil' InuYasha, seeing that...And Sesshoumaru! Ahh! Poor cutie! This is the first fic I've read that is about things like that (Not that that is a bad thing! Since unfortunatly, it happens in real life.) But keep going! I want to read the happy ending. *Huggz Sesshie* Oooh....poor thing...
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