| "Office Time" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Love Psycho [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 20:46 CDT
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-drools- If you don't write a sequel, /I'll/ kill you! Cake for you! And toys for Kaiba...-laughs-
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Reviewed By: Chibi Girl On: February 02, 2005 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAAAAAHH HAAAAA! That was cool! I loved it! Yami being uke to Seto is someting I've never even thought about and besides it was a really good lemon. Nice and realistic and abit scary for a secound ( I thought Seto was going to blow Yami's brians out for a minute there) But I loved it! ^___^ PS: Yes it did stick J 30 into the story. I was wondering about for a while.
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Reviewed By: Cutie Pie On: January 24, 2005 19:04 CST
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Screw you Dark Flamer!! I love fanfics where Yami is Seme to Seto! Oh, and that was really cool. Its a really funny thought to think of Seto sticking a gun up Yamis ass. ^__^ Please update soon I'll bee waiting!
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat On: August 24, 2004 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, you are a bad, twisted person. *smirks* You are just pure evil... I like you! Sequel? Weeeellll...I do have a question...what happened to Yami's Shadow Powers? Why didn't he fight back? If you write a sequel, maybe it should be about Yami punishing Kaiba for what he did...by raping and torturing him horribly and making him scream for death and then killing him! Bwahahahahahahahahaha!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Flamer On: July 29, 2004 13:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
**Warning. Incoming Flame** RARWASHe"HQ"!#?!"#!"!!!!!!. YOUR A MEAN BAD AND EVIL TWISTED PERSON!. YOU KNOW IT, I KNOW IT!. WE ALL KNOW THAT YAMI IS A SEME!. HE COULD EASILY FENDED OFF THAT PEICE OF SHIT WITH HIS SHADOW MAGIC!.... GRAAAL! **Flame over* Anyways, the spelling and grammar was okay, and your style rocks my socks. BUT MAKE YAMI SEME NEXT TIME!, OR FACE THE WRATH OFF THE DUSTBUNNIES!!
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