| "Washing Away The Past" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: finally
Reviewed By: k9gmilly On: June 18, 2005 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actcually like it finally vash is not gay or drunk and beat up. he finally let her know how he feels about her. finally vash and merly. im going to stop there. and you have some words in the wrong place like he grasped him.
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Reviewed By: EbilJo (nli) On: August 25, 2004 21:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am so glad that more and more fics of this type are being posted for Trigun. I'm just tried of people making him gay...*sigh*. Not that I'm against homosexual people or anything...it's just, I'd never see Vash as gay. Thanks for the beautiful fanfic! Hope you write more! And a little tip: If yo wrote this in notepad, next time write it in something that has spellcheck. I found a few slight spelling errors. ^_-
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Reviewed By: Hentai Review On: August 16, 2004 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's alright. I mean for a hentai fanfic this one isn't all that bad. The characters remain roughly in chararcter and apart from the rushed begining, the writing isn't all too shabby. Well done
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Reviewed By: thebigW [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nicely done. The spelling errors were the only thing that kept this from being really outstanding. Very creative and passionate.
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