| "Unholy Mass" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: irvines princes On: January 25, 2005 02:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it very much and damn is Bakura flexible he can somehow bite Mariks neck while Marik is given him head:) it was original i have to say...Having bloody gay sex inside a church i think i liked it alot
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Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress (not logged in) On: January 24, 2005 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How very intriguing, the smuttiness was just awesome. Yaoi lemon in a catholic church, defiantly interesting. Any sort of sequel to this would intrigued me.
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Title: ^-^ Right on.
Reviewed By: TheVampireKaori [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 13:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it, simply awesome. I'd really like to see another part to this. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 02:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Homosexual sex in a catholic church! Gods I love sacralige!
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Reviewed By: The Bystander [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am usually not one to rate work so highly, but I genuinely enjoyed this. I couldn't spot any errors, and you did very well with characterization. Of course, the smuttiness was good, too; very good. But anyway, I will certainly be interested in any sequel or follow-up that you provide!
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Title: Very Good.
Reviewed By: lDragen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 10:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was very good. It was all typed nicely and I didn't see any grammar mistakes. They seems pretty much in character for me. I hope you make a sequel because I'm looking forward to it. Sincerely, Ashtin.
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