| "Anniversary" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Anniversary
Reviewed By: Lunar Ice Dancer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If this is what they do for a MONTH anniversary, what do they do for a YEAR anniversary?
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Reviewed By: GTONE On: August 13, 2004 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is good. There were quite a few grammar mistakes however. I understand this was your first time writing in english. You should really get someone who knows the langauge better to proof read your work.
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 22:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
btw, I haven't read it yet. I might leave a review after I do.
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 22:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Two words. Quotation marks. I mean, come on! I learned how to use them in fifth grade, why can't you use them?
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Reviewed By: Daniela Bloom On: July 27, 2004 22:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Excelente...¡¡¡ella la inglesa!!! te felicito amigui ktakn...muy bien! y bastante largo por lo demás ¬¬ te debe haber costado mucho...bueno, ni tanto...tienes talento. Besitos.
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooo this is sooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooooooooooood
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, there were some grammar errors but nothing to make a fuss about, the story was so excellent! Keep writing, you have such excellent lemon skills!
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Title: Awasome!
Reviewed By: Mic Mic [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that it is a one-shot but maybe you could have a little more youkai Inuyasha action. I lvoed your portrayal of youkai Inuyasha!
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