| "Cream's Worst Nightmare" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Title: Woah! I need more
Reviewed By: dark-_-drizzt On: August 28, 2004 17:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
carry on |)00|) thats sweet man \/\/0o+ !!"!!!1!1111111one
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Title: Nice work!
Reviewed By: Orangespeed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 20:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Orangespeed here! Nice plot and excellent twist at the end there! I never would've guessed it was all a dream had the title not clued me in juuuuuuuuuust a little bit. I'd give it higher but it only let me do 10. I look forward to reading more of your fics! Peace out, bro! Orangespeed out!
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Title: umm..
Reviewed By: megaman roolz!! On: August 27, 2004 08:52 EDT
Comment/Review:
right ok so i'm gonna take in to account what u said and and so... Theres alot of eggman and cream getting off which is quite disturbing and and yeathe nightmare idea was reaaly good andi noticed there was some more of that "writers slight of hand" there and I'm really impressed with the way you write.keep up the good work ^_^
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Title: thank god for that...
Reviewed By: Tikal(Can't be ask to log in) On: August 26, 2004 15:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank god it was only a dream... twice. i think you should bring some other character into it... like the chaotix. (is that how it's spelt?) that'd make it really funny. like Cream hire them for something. i don't know. but you losing out on the humour. bring it up a little... key? great though can't wait to see the next part.
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Title: ..?
Reviewed By: Neo Mog On: August 26, 2004 03:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wha? I don't get it.. First shes @#$@ing Eggman and enjoying it, and now shes back how she was? Or was that a dream too. Also this chapter was short....and it kinda was confusing. They just left poor Cream there alone.
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Title: Not as sick, but damn that was funny!
Reviewed By: Orangespeed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 20:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seeing Robotnik with his clothes off makes the urban yeti look anorexic." Lemme say this; you have got some of the funniest quips I've ever seen in fiction, and this is just chapter 6!! I cannot wait to see the next xhapter! Oh, if you could, let Tails yiff Cream sometime soon, please? I am getting sorta sick of seeing Eggman get all the fun. >_<
Orangespeed out!
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Reviewed By: u no who i am!!! On: August 25, 2004 14:11 EDT
Comment/Review:
pleeeeeeeeeeeaz update u no u wanna....
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Title: OMG!!!!! ROFLMAO!!!!!
Reviewed By: OMG!!!!!!! On: August 25, 2004 13:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZ UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: aaaaaaaaaaaaegr On: August 25, 2004 13:04 EDT
Comment/Review:
another day another review and so, that was AWESOME |)00|) OMG!!LOL!!! UPDATE or ill set my dark-drizzit on you LOL!!
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Title: Story gets sicker and sicker by the minutes...its great!
Reviewed By: Orangespeed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 20:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I must admit, you've taken something really disturbing and made it also very funny! However...I WANT CRAILS!!!!!! Im sure evryone else wants that too!!!! PLEAAAAAAASE put it in!!!! Orangespeed out!
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Reviewed By: dark-drizzt On: August 24, 2004 17:36 EDT
Comment/Review:
foxboy! foxboy! we want CRA-ILS! we want CRA-ILS! we want CRA-ILS! we want CRA-ILS!we want CRA-ILS!we want CRA-ILS!
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Title: c'mon ppl!
Reviewed By: dark-drizzt On: August 24, 2004 16:58 EDT
Comment/Review:
c'mon peeps review we WANT this story if u dont review wen u get on here i will hak u
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Reviewed By: Neo Mog On: August 22, 2004 20:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.......... wtf... XD XD XD I wonder what the others have to say about this and what will happen next!
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Title: kk...
Reviewed By: DARK-DRIZZT On: August 22, 2004 08:08 EDT
Comment/Review:
OMG!LOL! that was totally sick i think u should have made that into a nightmare 0_o;; LOL u made me feel so honoured pellin my name wring like that but yes v.good from dark-DRIZZT kk lol
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Title: ....
Reviewed By: Tikal(didn't log in) On: August 22, 2004 05:03 EDT
Comment/Review:
o...k so... eggman is a pedifile too. sad... i didn't like that chapter. except the jokes. carry on though i can't wait to find out what happens next.
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