| "Cream's Worst Nightmare" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: DIPLOMATIC_FOX [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 19:09 EDT
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oh shit is right damn that is crazy
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Reviewed By: syber_net11 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 21:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story was great, but it would have been even better if on CH. 1 Cream had've pissed herself. Please e-mail with a response at andrew_w_17@yahoo.com. Thank You
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Reviewed By: I don't feel like signing in On: July 03, 2005 21:00 EDT
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Man, I love hentai stories, but sex isn't all that funny and important. Sex is not an anwser to everything. If your gonna make a hentai story, at least put some sense into it.
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Reviewed By: (Still deciding to join or not) On: June 10, 2005 01:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I've been reading your work ever since I discovered this site, which was right before you started...A creils or whatever you called it. Let me say that you are one of the best Tails and Cream (favorite pairing for lemons) writers I've seen, and probably the best lemon writer I've come across so far. Your work is nice and sexy and all, but the the only fault (and one that actually annoys me too) is the fact that Tails and Cream's personalities seem off. So far, your stories give me the impression that Tails and Cream are still their default ages. Thus, they should keep their original personalities. In your stories however, Tails and Cream come off as red necks. Even if you made Cream 22, she would still be pretty polite. I have not seen you do this once. So yeah, your a great lemon writer, but Tails and Cream seem sort of off key. However that is not a major thing as you are most likely portraying them how you want to for your enjoyment, and comedy relief by what I've seen. So for future work I would like to see Cream and Tails act more like themselves, polite and fairly innocent. As in not cussing as much. But that's just me. You are the writer, you have the power, do what you want. I'll still read and enjoy your work so long as you don't COMPLETELY change Tails and Cream's personalities, which you have yet to do. So yeah... Your a good writer to be able to write lemon and have a plot, which is not common... I'm running out of characters so thanks for reading my comment. |
Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: UltimateXShadow On: June 06, 2005 20:26 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MAKE MORE CHAPTERS, PLLLLLLLLLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: BEST STORY EVER!
Reviewed By: Yamidiot [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 05:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Extremely good Tails and cream fanfic, Best sonic fic I ever read in my life.
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Tikal (too Long, too lazy) On: February 19, 2005 12:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This rocks. i almost pissed myself laughing becuase of those jokes. Tails Rocks. how the hell can you juggle basketball on your... never mind. update soon, thank you.
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Title: lmfao
Reviewed By: the rad red (never shall he log in !) On: February 07, 2005 20:47 EST
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that has to be the funnyest chapter ive read in a long time lol i fell of my chair with the whole playing fule wth vigana thing lol
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Reviewed By: Yamidiot [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 17:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz update, dude Really good story though
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Reviewed By: i read this On: November 21, 2004 20:47 EST
Comment/Review:
"Such kindness will be rewarded, Tails. Perhaps the flavor of your cum will find its way down my throat when this is all said and done...." That's deep! Keep writin'!
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Reviewed By: Tziek da anthro On: October 08, 2004 00:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eggman.. And.. Cream... together?... Doesn't work out in my mind. Like two plus two adding up to 10. nice to know that was just a dream though. :P Keep up the good writing, update soon... I wanna see how this turns out. :)
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Title: its not finished?
Reviewed By: dark_drizzt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 09:44 EDT
Comment/Review:
Is it finished plz,say it isnt so!!!!!
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Title: wiked
Reviewed By: evil laughter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 09:41 EDT
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lovin ur work man ! keep it up!!! ^.^
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Title: Hallejuah!!
Reviewed By: Orangespeed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 22:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Orangespeed here! Change that Enjoyment to 10 MILLION!!! I'm so happy that Cream got herself laid by a RESPECTABLE character! Hurray for Tails! Hurray for Cream!! I look forward to your next fic!! Peace out, bro! Orangespeed out!
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Reviewed By: Neo Mog On: August 29, 2004 04:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm... that was a good ending.
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