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| "Four Star Dragonball" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] | Title: agrees with blue_limpet666
Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you gotta UPDATE!!! this is too good to just stop here... and look when blue_limpet666 wrote that review! around a YEAR ago! come on *starts whining* pleeeeaaaassee?? ~ this is an exellent fic, you don't get much fics this good and it took me weeks to find a fic to read that's this good (ok, that's sort of a complament u.u;;) ~ anywayz, the point is is that i hope this will get your butt in gear so you can update 'kay? ^-^
| Title: Berlink
Reviewed By: blue_limpet666 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 07:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blinks* *coughs* *clears throat* *looks dignified*... WRITE MORE NOW!!!!! *glares* I mean it! *whines* you cant leave it there! Pleeeease write more. I really like how everyone, despite the strange situations manage to stay in character. you've written an excellent ff, now if you'd only finish it, it would be perfect *pokes* Poor Goku...
| Title: Ch 8
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 00:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SWEET!!!! FINALLY, Goku "might" realize Vegeta's not just screwing around with his brain, or lack thereof... then again, I retract my harshness cause when you're in a suicidal depression, your brain really does think up some seriously stupid s--t. Anyway, enough apologizing, time for the mating! Woo-hoo! =)
| Title: Fucking Goku
Reviewed By: MyMiddleFinger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 07:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fucking Goku, leaving his son, not confessing his love for Vegeta and saying Vegeta was toying with him, it's not toying if he wants you you dumbass! Sorry, it's like 8 in the morning and i haven't had coffee yet so i'm a little bitter. You need to have Goku kiss Vegeta and Vegeta putting goku through the pain that Goku put him through. That would be funny....
| Title: Ch 7
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 14:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I can't believe I haven't reviewed this totally kick-ass story yet! This is an awesome story which I've been following for a while, but have only just realized I never reviewed on! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!
| Title: Emo tear....
Reviewed By: MyMiddleFinger [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 08:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So sad, write the next chapter, it's such a good story, i want more... MORE! Poor Goku but even worse poor Vegeta. I believe that to love and lose is worse then to never have loved before becuase when you find that first someone that loves you back, your mind is a flutter an endless emotion of happiness. I hate love but i love the story.... hehehe... I love you too becuase you write the story but i'll love you more and give you a cookie if you post the next chapter ASAP. Bye bye
| Title: Four star dragonball
Reviewed By: Frederikke On: November 15, 2004 08:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great story so far. simply love it. hope to see some lemon sone please update soon
| Title: O0o0o0o
Reviewed By: Mister Misery On: October 30, 2004 09:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me likely, you needa write more involved with drug overdoses, mental break downs and lost love. The suicide thing is an amazing idea, but then again i love almost anything to do with death. ~Tear~ poor vegeta, teach you to marry that wench and confuse poor poor goku, good job! Here you go, ~hands cookie~ enjoy, i'll give you another one upon you completing the next chapter.... i may even give you two!
| Title: Aaaarrrrgggghhhh
Reviewed By: pixelgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 18:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
What have you done to poor confused Goku? See - I couldn't wait for the hotel. (Okay, so I hadn't realized you were here, too.) Vegeta's going to find him and save him, right? Right? - the goddess demanded. I'm kind of confused about the whole party thing, though. If it isn't going to be for awhile, why are they hanging streamers? Even Goku would notice that. Vegeta doesn't realize what he has done... Okay, I'm ready for another chapter. Something about a suicidal Goku and a emotionally confused Vegeta does something to me. You'll get more reviewers - give it time. And consider posting on adultfanfiction.net, too. They tend to be better there. But don't waste your time with fanfiction.net. And then there are the yahoo lists...saiyanslash and saiyansecrets.
| Reviewed By: FireFlyGirl On: August 09, 2004 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe no one is reviewing! Then again, mediaminer is known for its lack of reviewers. You should post on adultfanfiction.com. People review more often there :) Anywho, I got tired of waiting for weekly updates at the Hotel, so I deicided to stop in here and see if this fic was posted, and sure enough, IT WAS! I'm so very interested in this fic, and you've left it at such a cliffhanger, you evil person! Ya gottaa update soon! I can't wait any longer! This is one of my fav fics ^.^
| Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: SunnyVampireChild On: August 04, 2004 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guess there's just a little misunderstanding with the kiss on Goku's part.This was a good and lots of angsty chapter,keep up with it..
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