| "Fllay the pupeeter" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: NICE!!!
Reviewed By: Down with gay stories On: August 08, 2005 06:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey man that was really good. you should do a three way between kira, fley and sai or kira, tolle, and millialia.
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Reviewed By: Hentai_Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 16:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hot!!!! *favorite* ^_~
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Title: One problem
Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 05:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have only two problems with this story: the first is the fact that is a chunk of text. The second is necrophillia. I am not a supporter of that kind of illegal activity.
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Reviewed By: dulcinea326 On: April 13, 2005 13:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its pretty gOod... yOu've gOt me hOoKed up! write more of kira/fllay... they're a nice pairing...
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Reviewed By: faith_2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was really good but it was kind of hard to read,with it all in one paragraph,and all,but besides that it was realy good!
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 09:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: Obsessions On: October 12, 2004 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the story, but it was really hard to read, with all of it in one paragraph.
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Reviewed By: Crazy Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was somewhat enjoyable, but was difficult to read do to the paragraph structure. I found myself lost a couple of time due to this problem. Nonetheless it was rather enjoyable for the most part. ~Crazy Neko
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Title: Till
Reviewed By: Till On: September 04, 2004 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story, just need to use more paragraphs
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Title: Tyrenol
Reviewed By: Tyrenol [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me give you a bit of advice, my friend: Paragraph breaks. Use 'em; use 'em with love. At any rate, I like your fic. :)
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Reviewed By: dfwrfw On: August 01, 2004 17:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hope you write more about Fllay and Kira.
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