"Forgiven" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Hi Reviewed By: rose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 20:43 CDT Comment/Review: I um... really like your story so can you please update in MM.org and FF.net? Pretty PLEASE!
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Title: :) Reviewed By: satsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 22:09 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: omg i love it!!not only because it is about my love kakashi ahahah because it is a overall good story. the chapters are a little short but thats ok i still love it and u need to update soon!!! hehe
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Reviewed By: kuroshinobi On: September 03, 2004 02:54 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: its really good!! can ya please make it longer??? =D
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Title: fabby2 Reviewed By: Lady Celestia17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 15:09 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: another great chappie! I adore Kakashi, and love thgis storie almost as much. Keep it up! ^_^
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Title: fabby Reviewed By: Lady Celestia17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 14:58 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow, this is a fabulous first chappie, and I can't wait to read the next! ~Love, LC
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Reviewed By: Menace to society On: August 01, 2004 17:25 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh you tease you!I like your writing, it kept me hooked. I cant wait to see more. (more Kakashi that is. he he ^_^)
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Reviewed By: Noki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 21:34 CDT Comment/Review: lol, poor Kakashi's gonna need some advil for that! ^^;; Well, it's a nice start. I'll look forward to updates. ^~ ta!
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Reviewed By: Fallen Fantasist [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 13:46 CDT Comment/Review: Oh.. this is getting quite interesting. I wonder who the chick is... and I wonder what sort of relationship she has this Kakashi. It's a wonderful start. I see greatness in your furture! ~Fallen Fantasist
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Reviewed By: bitchy reviewer #0239412342134123412341234 On: July 28, 2004 14:43 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved it! Please update soon! I love fics with OCs in them, so please update soon! ^-^UUU
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