| "The Murders Of The Higurashi Family" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: The Murders Of The Higurashi Family
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 00:18 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 12:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is pretty good but the errors need to be addressed before posting. Spelling and wrong tenses make it not as pleasurable as it could be. Example: Mitts (gloves)...midst; nun... none (same with done); purity worm...pretty warm; questionly...questioningly; brat(pesky child)...brought; terns...turns; aloud (speaking)... alowed; raped (physical assault)...wrapped. There are 7 more in this chapter. Other than that the story is very good. Keep it up
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Reviewed By: moga On: December 13, 2004 06:15 CST
Comment/Review:
i love your story please update soon
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Reviewed By: lil_angel_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 09:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like it! its about time i read a good ol' horror story!! cant wait for the next chap. post it soon ^^ oh btw..might wanna concentrate on spelling and gramer a bit more, ne? ^.~
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_kitsune_tears (not logged in) On: July 28, 2004 17:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
OOOOOOO, cool!!! update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^__~
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