| "The Nightmare Saga: Warrior of Shadows" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: So cool
Reviewed By: harmonious jade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 13:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked these last few chapters. Your story is getting so indepth! I love that! One minor gramatical problem I noticed. Your/You're. Several times you put your where you should have put you're. Here's an easy reminder. Read through the sentence and instead of saying 'your', say 'you are'. If 'you are' is correct, you should use you're. Other than that, it's great.
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Reviewed By: harmonious jade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 14:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
*taps foot* I'm waiting for the next chapter... ;) PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: harmonious jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This is one of the best original Ranma stories I have ever read. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Your writing style is so wonderful. Much better than most you find on databases such as this. Keep up the great work.
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