| "Youkai, Jubaku, and Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Reviewed By: gothhieilover19 On: August 19, 2004 16:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
i hope you update soon i really want to read what happens next and as for the pairings how about akito/kagome
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Reviewed By: egyptianprepeater On: August 19, 2004 13:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooh oooh ooohh i love your story!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE I WANT A NEW CHAPTER!!! CAN IT BE KYO/KAGOME OR A FB/INU PAIRING A CROSSOVER PAIRING OR SOMETHING COME ON NO INUYASHA/KAGOME PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: xxxxx2 On: August 19, 2004 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the romantic pairings u should have are kyo/kagome or yuki/kagome or haru/kagome no inuyasha!!!! that is a boring pairing since its traditional and tohru can go with whoever is left cause i seriously dont like her so i so bubbley anyways i hope u update soon i will be waiting chow!
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Reviewed By: xxxxx2 On: August 19, 2004 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the romantic pairings u should have are kyo/kagome or yuki/kagome or haru/kagome no inuyasha!!!! that is a boring pairing since its traditional and tohru can go with whoever is left cause i seriously dont like her so i so bubbley anyways i hope u update soon i will be waiting chow!
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Reviewed By: Kayori [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 05:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it so much... heres another review~! This is the first time I'm actually doing this but... PLEASE ADD SESSHOUMARU INTO THE FIC AND MAKE IT SESS/KAGO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! or maybe... I donno do something I sort-of suggested earlier?!?!!?!?!?! This fic is REALLY good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so::: PLEASE:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Kayori [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 05:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAI!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! Please Update SOON!!! Pairings hmmm..... Will Sesshoumaru be appearing in this fic? If s9o Sess/kago if not, Kago= Kyo, Yuki Tohru= Kyo, Yuki I donno one or the other... Or maybe Kago/Akito?!?!?!!?!?!?! I DON'T KNOW!!!!!! or HARU?!?!?! TOO MANY GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! @_@ Ugh... I REALLY DONNO~! I just hope that you update SOON~! BYE BYEZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 00:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cools beans. I like it. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: obsessivekawaiigurl (the author) On: August 03, 2004 19:48 CDT
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this is the author again i would like to clearly state that i will not post another chapter until i get 5 reviews
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Reviewed By: purplepeopleater On: August 03, 2004 18:07 CDT
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Is Inu-chan gonna show up? is he is he. huh huh huh? ::sighs:: I hope so. Update soon! Cheers
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Reviewed By: Goddess G [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 07:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great chapter! But could you make your chapters a little longer pleas. Update VERY soon! ^_^
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Title: pairings
Reviewed By: me again...heh heh On: August 02, 2004 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
lessee...InuKag SanMir HiroKisa NO NO NO to: KyoKagr YukiToh YukiKyo um...KyoToh is okay (but I really think you shouldn't pair her with anyone), as well as any combo of the pervs...HaruKyo or HaruYuki is okay too...
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Title: grumble
Reviewed By: the other chu chica On: August 02, 2004 17:30 CDT
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dude, you still need a beta. Yay, things happen! It doesn't flow quite as well as it could, but...oh, and you really need to find some way to specify when Kame etc are thinking...italics works well. And when you change POV's it's good to insert a break so that the transition is smoother (see I'm in beta mode already!)And you used the clichéd description of Kame...'raven-haired'...[shivers]. Oh well, it's good, this is a deaththreat--you will die :). I really don't like this site's formatting, it's too confuzling!
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Reviewed By: obsessivekawaiigurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 14:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is the author please tell me what pairs you want!
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Title: hey great story keep it up! please have the next chapter soon!
Reviewed By: ao neko On: July 31, 2004 09:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I love the story line keep it up!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Hey could ED(from cowboy bebop)join the school for a week or a month some time in the story? I would like that!^_^ I really like the carictor's ratings!! And you comment on there ratings! It is very clever! keep it up, ED
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Reviewed By: Goddess G [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 04:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Geat beggining. Keep going your doing great. Update soon and make the chapters longer please! ^_^
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