| "Youkai, Jubaku, and Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Reviewed By: the evil fluffy muffin queen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 21:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good! but as you probably realized, the 4th chapter isnt showing up, and that makes me very sad. please fix it? just delete the chapter, and then re-upload it. i really want to read! you left us off with a cliffie! i think the main pairing should be kyo/kagome, since kyo is so much like kagome, and try not to inu-bash please? thanks, and update soon!!! please!!! i love this fic!
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Title: wtf?
Reviewed By: Haruka-Hime [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 14:06 CST
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where is chapter 4 it is all, well... blank sorry 'bout the title just the result of a mood swing !!!!!!!!!(currently humming) sorry for the extreme randomness
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Reviewed By: alonlygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 19:49 CST
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what the hell.....*twitch* please put something in chap 4 other than that wha bout kagome and haru *batts eyelashes innocely*
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Title: umm.......
Reviewed By: armybrat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I vote for Kag/Haru...... also your last chapter didn't go through
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Title: it was good excepted one thing
Reviewed By: phantomphan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
on the last chapter on Youkai, Jubaku, and Miko" did not go though.
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Title: injuyasha_1234
Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say that I really enjoy your fic and that I only just started reading FB just yesterday and I like how you used the characters in this fic. I don't like however how chapter 4 has no chapter.... I can't wait to find out what happens and I hope that you write something for this fic soon... until then, With love, Mari-chan
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Reviewed By: Moon Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 00:02 CST
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please update soon i luv this fic. also chapter 4 is missing.
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Title: ...uumm
Reviewed By: Silent Miko Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
..... you have a missing chapter ...thats pethetic
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Reviewed By: Shadowed On: August 08, 2005 14:03 CDT
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KYAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!! ^^ this story is really good! um...i would like to vote for Kagome/Kyo because i have yet to see a paring like that and i think they will be an awsome couple!!! ^^ Please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: June 28, 2005 02:15 CDT
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the last chapter, unfortunate events, is not showing up...I would like to continue reading this!!! its fun!!! Kagome/HAru and Tohru/Kyo
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Reviewed By: coolgalz [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 03:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The newest chapter is missin. What happened to it? Anyway plz update!!!
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Title: Missing Chapter
Reviewed By: ChaosKree8er2 On: May 30, 2005 18:39 CDT
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Your newest chapter is missing...there'e no writing on the page...
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Title: meli
Reviewed By: Chibes [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 17:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Me agaiN, YUKI/THORU KAG/KYO AND KAGURA/INU
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Title: ???
Reviewed By: meli [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 17:57 CDT
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Uh... was there supposed to be a chapter 4???? Because I'm sorry I didn't see one or does my laptop hate me? I really love the story so far, and how'd InuYasha get there so quickly???
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Title: u must continue!!!!
Reviewed By: vampirgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
inu should be with tohru k? now continue!! u can not leave us hangin like that!! wat happened 2 the 4th sh?? pleze continue ASAP!!!
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Reviewed By: princess_of_light [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 15:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
umm... where the fourth chapter it's not there did something happen and i love your stories
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Reviewed By: Ijou On: April 21, 2005 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story, and it would be much apprecaited if you were to update soon. Im not sure I can take the suspence...and Im not being sarcastic.
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Reviewed By: FushigiHeart On: March 23, 2005 13:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW that was good i hope u update soon^.^ is going to be a iy/kh pairing cause i think that kh only belongs to iy, so yeah and tohru should go with either kyo or yuki but mostly kyo okay^.^
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Reviewed By: DODIDII On: March 22, 2005 12:17 CST
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um..... wheres the last chapter? Its posted, but no words showed up!!! NO! CONSPARICY!!!!! TREASON!! ARSON!!! POLICE!! FBI!! CSI!!!
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Reviewed By: asswip On: March 22, 2005 12:09 CST
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Stop putting the damn authors notes smack dab in the middle of the story!!! If you must, put a little star by it and say in the end!! Good story though.
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: March 01, 2005 18:22 CST
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arrrrrrg! You end it at a cliffhanger, then the next chapter isn't even there?! Waaah... T_T KYO/KAGOMEEEEEEEE >_
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Reviewed By: Fanfic Fan! On: February 19, 2005 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your series! Although i think the chapters should be longer. Oh yes and i think Inu-yasha/Tohru would be cute if it cant be Kagome. I though it would be cute w/ Kagome and Inu but i dont know if any other viewers would like that., so my choice is: INUYASHA AND TOHRU KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND WRITE LONGER CHAPTERS PLEASE! THE END TO QUICK WHEN I WANT TO KEEP READING.
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Title: InuToh
Reviewed By: Ying Fa On: February 19, 2005 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok this story is soo cool!! If possible would you put InuYasha and Tohru together?
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Reviewed By: maxien87 On: January 26, 2005 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i love it plz write more and you 4th chapter doesn't show up!-i cried- ((;-.-;)) and i vote for a kag/yuki id really like that i don't know about the others though anyways thanks plz fix the ch4 problem
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Reviewed By: Terrawolf On: January 18, 2005 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story so far, very interesting. I like the classic Inu/Kag and for Tohru, it has to be Toh/Kyo. Keep up the good writing.
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 18:14 CST
Comment/Review:
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo i luv it but u weally dont hav a last chappie u kno lol srry but i wanna kno wats gonna happen w/ inu chan lol i think eather kyo/kag haru/kag or yuki/kag would b great w/ this lol pleaz update soon and i really like this story
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Reviewed By: SuperMilkChan13 On: January 09, 2005 15:46 CST
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wow this is a really good story and i think that the pairings should be kagome and haru cause they would make suck a cool couple but if your not going to put haru in then i say that it should be kagome and sesshomaru!
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Reviewed By: Sunnisha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 14:44 CST
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I don't really know who Kagome should go with. Whatever the other peoples pick I'll be happy. Inuyasha...I have no idea. Anyway, please continue on with the story and update soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: AngelOfLife01 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 22:30 CST
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Great story!!! ^.^ Could you please not make this a Inu/Kag and/or Sess/Kag. There are WAAAAAAAAAAAY too many of them, and I think that is enough. So I say if you want a Sess/Kag, go look at the other ones and stop voting for them to be a choice. Because, seriously, don't any of you people get tired of reading them over and over and over again? There needs to be more pairings like: Kyo/Kagome, Haru/Kagome, etc..... Anyway, Please Update Soon!!!
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Reviewed By: ChaosKree8er [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 17:35 CST
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UUUMMMMMMM,Kyo/Kagome! Love the story. from ChaosKree8er With love and cookies
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