| "Mended Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: UR Lil Sis [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 18:40 CDT
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Damn you I want another chapter up. i need to know what is going to happen. U other readers know she's my big sis and all. u would think that being my sis she would share the up coming chapter with me. But nnnoooooo I've got to wait till she posts it. It better be a HAPPY ending!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Yaoilovertash [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 03:13 CDT
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I really love this fic, but when are Duo and Heero finally going to get together? It seems they need each other and they just keep getting farther apart,n ow that Heero found Duo, I hope you would make them get together.
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: September 03, 2004 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chap. I loved it.I can't wait to find out what happens so please please UPDATE SSOOOONN!!!!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it, love it, love IT!!!!!! I just love drama!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 16:22 CDT
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I really hate how you end your stories. I think is still a bastard.
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Title: still a bastard ~_^
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: September 02, 2004 12:14 CDT
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But he's such a cute and lovable bastard, that Kyle is. Fic still amuses me, therefore it really is quite necessary for you to continue it ^_^ Well, not really. Though that would be a nifty idea. Anyway, update when you're able ^_^
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: September 02, 2004 01:27 CDT
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Thank u thank u for updating this story.I can't belieave how sad that was.I like Kyle now and also i thought the hole thing with the doc and all was funny.I'm glade that u like happy endings and thats good because if not i would die.One last thing a 2x4 fic would be a DuoxQuatre fic not a HxR which would be a HildexRelena fic.I think that is nice them gettin together and all.Well keep up the good work and UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 00:27 CDT
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sorry my grammer and spelling r bad when i type fast?
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic and u have no idea how much! Kyle is so mean and i ahve no idea what he ment my "i win this one"??? but i have to read more must have more. You are a very good writer! This is one of my fav fics!It would just not be the same if Heero and Duo got together that easly. PLEASE UPDATE SOOM!!! Your writing is very nice. the second lemon was a lot better then the first. The way you said what was ahpping and how you went back and forth tell the reader how they both felt. It was very nice howyou into the way the piolts would act...ja ne ^_^
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: August 19, 2004 15:38 CDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I hert my wrist so I can't type all that well ..So all I'm going to do is begg you to update and say I loved this chapter...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: August 19, 2004 15:37 CDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I hert my wrist so I can't type all that well ..So all I'm going to do is begg you to update and say I loved this chapter...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: August 19, 2004 15:34 CDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I hert my wrist so I can't type all that well ..So all I'm going to do is begg you to update and say I loved this chapter...
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: August 18, 2004 21:56 CDT
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Write more please!! I've been enthralled with this fic, but chose to only now tell you this. Evidently I assumed that you knew of my loving this fic via osmosis or something. Anyway, I love Kyle, he's such an absolute bastard!! Please more!
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Reviewed By: Vidalark [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 12:57 CDT
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I'm not to sure I like this Kyule guy since he seems to be trying to play to many of the guys. All in all I'm still loving this story though I do hope that Duo realizes that Heero ha a hard time admiting to things including his own emotions. Write more please!
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