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Reviewed By: Mystic Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 09:29 CST
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cool
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 16:08 CST
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ah ahahah ha... so good *smiling so much she wonders if her face will start to hurt* wow what a wonderful ending *grins* i knew one of them was going to say something about babies but I was sure it would be when the puppies came out tackled them! I kinda figured that Duo and Wuffers got closer since they found themselves in similar situations where they thought they would never be loved... hmm I was so thinking duo was going to say he was pregnant lol i really surprised myself with the thought, i guess its from reading a certain fic called 'chimaera'!!! Waaaa!! I love your stories and I can't wait to read the updates for the other one! keep writing!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 14:47 CST
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A pissed Quat is really cute!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 23, 2004 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool,yah I really mean it ...really, really cool keep going and update soon I like this...
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 16:12 CDT
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that was great i'm glad that it all turned out well for them.This fic turned into a really good one and all so i that u will write more like it in the future.Byebye ^_^
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Reviewed By: Raven Walker On: October 23, 2004 09:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great ending. I think a story with children in it could be funny. Espically if someone had twins or triplets *hint, hint, hint* "Hey what happened to Dragon Fighters?"
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Reviewed By: Raven Walker On: October 10, 2004 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, keep in mind that it would be even better if you write an epilogue, hint, hint, hint.
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Reviewed By: KJ On: September 09, 2004 16:41 CDT
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I need more. Another story or epiolgue. It was to good to end.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: September 09, 2004 02:29 CDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ok well I have to make this short because I'm off to Dallas children's Hospital again with Jillian..My 16 years old daughter so I just wanted to let you know I read your chapter and or update or story and enjoyed them very much!!! ... You see I had 27 chapters to read and review so I'm doing a mass review because I have to go back to Dallas. So Please update and I will read your next chapter and or update or story when I return from Dallas.And thanks for updating..Patty 40
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarustruluv [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 00:31 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story. It was a little difficult to understand at times because of a few grammatical errors, but otherwise it was great to read. It almost brought me to tears near the end. I hope that I have the chance to read more of your work.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: September 08, 2004 23:54 CDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ok well I have to make this short because I'm off to Dallas children's Hospital again with Jillian..My 16 years old daughter so I just wanted to let you know I read your chapter and or update or story and enjoyed them very much!!! ... You see I had 27 chapters to read and review so I'm doing a mass review because I have to go back to Dallas. So Please update and I will read your next chapter and or update or story when I return from Dallas.And thanks for updating..Patty 40
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*wipes tear from eye* Wow! that was so beautiful. It makes me fell all warm and fuzzy inside......or was that something I ate. *death glare* THERE HAD BETTER BE LEMON IN THE NEXT CHAPTER DAMNIT. ^_^
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this.Yes plzz!!!!!! make a last chapture. I am happy that duo and Heero made up.YAY!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE HAPPY ENDINGS!!!!!!!!!! I WISH U LUCK ON YOUR OTHER STORIES TO COME!! ice_princess_1185
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 18:59 CDT
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noooo!!!! damn you, please hurry with the next chapter.
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