| "Tangled Up In Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: sun_falling On: October 18, 2004 13:56 CDT
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Woah... This is incredible angst. I'm really feeling for the characters in every chapter and I can't wait to see what you write next.
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Reviewed By: calmwind On: October 09, 2004 03:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. this story is so beautiful. I don't believe I have read something quite as exquisite in fanfiction history. I love the way you characterize the relationship between trowa, duo and quatre. I also believe that In the end, the better, purer, truer love will remain. This is a truly wonderful story with an amazing plot and wonderful characterization. It gives good insight on what real people experience. Please finish this fic and post in more places. It should be shared.
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Title: Absolutely Amazing!
Reviewed By: dreadpiratejanah On: October 02, 2004 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely adore this story! It is not your average fluffy fanfic. It dark, angsty, and somtimes heartbreaking...but it is always captivating. Sintari breathes life to her characters in such a way that forces the reader to feel both the characters' pain and joy. Its not every author that can write characters that people become emotionally invested in, yet Sintari is definately one such author. She is a remarkable writer and I look forward to many more chapters of this story!
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Reviewed By: priscel- --notsignedin-- - On: September 22, 2004 16:55 CDT
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*after this latest chapter her thoughts sum up to this one expression* hmm... Damn it why does Duo have to be such a bastard and hurt Quat more and more! I could see him not wanting Quat to be with him because he wants him to live but he didn't have to be so tactless, straightforward sure but I think he could have said it better than the way e did. I was so scared for Quat when Duo entertained the idea of telling him when he spoke to him on the phone that the day he was leaving for the company would be the same day of quat's mom's funneral! Quat needs Duo soo... I was so happy he didn't make that call and got to play 'sex me up baby!' with his Hee-koi (I'm very very happy that Heero wants more from their relationship and cares enough about Duo to want to ask why he looks inward when he does). Although the melancholy is thick in this chapter I'm glad Duo faced off with his mom, Go DUO!! I loved the poem, i've read it once before but it's been so long. As I think of it more it makes me worry a bit about Quat, his behavior as of late is gloomy and he seems disconnect from others somewhat (as should be expected!). I just hope that their friendship can be salvaged even though they will be pretty far from each other. update soon!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 16:40 CDT
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oh man, poor Q! So the little spill about being in school and being known as a fag... Q was a fighter!! Wahoo!! I couldn't see it any other way, especially knowing Q's character. *big grin* more more more...feed my addiction, a good thing really, please!
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Reviewed By: priscel--- On: August 25, 2004 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn. *feels silly but got all teary eyed at Duo's admission that he felt that Quat was the only one who loved him, truly loved him* wooo... I'm speechless, but that usually doesn't last long. Man, I dunno what to say about the phone called shared between the two. It had to hurt that Duo acted like he didn't remember and probably more so later that morning because Duo called Quat 'friend', best being absent. maybe he didn't pick up on that but what's between them is so strong... right now I don't know what to say. *beams and glomps Sintari* thank you! p.s. sorry about waiting so long to rate this piece, I guess I thought it understood to be a 10 all around...
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Title: *screams* No!
Reviewed By: priscel *blinks* On: August 24, 2004 15:32 CDT
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man! comeon!! Quat has to notice sooner or later... Didn't anyone notice what was going on? Hey Does quat have his spaceheart? Although he's all lovy dovy with Tro at the moment couldn't he sense Duo's agony!? man oh man... i see partially what you mean by Heero being the villian, *stares with big bright eyes twinkling with hope* but maybe he just like being alittle dominant and won't hurt Duo?! *makes puppy eyes* hmm Duo really does care a great deal for Quat but maybe he was never able to show it the right way because he was unsure if he was in love with Q or was it brother/family bond between them and he unconsciously didn't want to risk that but at the same time felt lost enough to feel that noone would love him as much as quat and hence the teasing taunting of Quat to be in the place of one the numerous flavas of the evening?! Man Heero... I can't believe he said that. I hope Duo gets away and nothing happens... update soon Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 05:01 CDT
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man work sucks... i finally get to ch.6 and I have to stop to go to work *pouts* I'll be back later with a proper review ****Hugs****
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Title: ch3
Reviewed By: priscel (^_^) On: August 04, 2004 16:01 CDT
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hi again! I'm glad I understood two-fold show Duo and Q put on in the presence of others and in privacy. hmm they meet when they were twelve and Quat has some ideas why Duo's humping others like there's no tomorrow, so will we get flash backs...glispes into their past and see how their actions or the action of others, especially those Maxwell senior, influenced the two of them. I know we got a glipse but ya know not a really vivid, mosel as if we could see it replay in their thoughts. Hmm Heero a villanous love interest of Duo... I'm not familiar with love interest (pouts) and Heero villianous *evil smirk* it depends on how far you intend to go. let's see if duo ends up with heero and stops screwing around because he wants to be commited to this love interest but once a relationship starts and Duo suffers abuse that's very similar to what may or may not have happen with his pops then I would like to see how he copes. Maybe he'll go into denial because there' love there and he gets all self-deprecaty. How Quat copes (me thinks if ya go that route then quat'll end up with tro ne?), what happens when he approaches duo about the abuse if it happens or other stuff could happen, a villanous heero could go after Quat?! *sigh* I dunno if I can handle Quat torture, man I can barely handle duo torture because even though i love it I want it over so he can be happy again. *smirks* I talking way too much. more please!
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Title: ch.2
Reviewed By: Priscel *yawns* On: August 01, 2004 22:05 CDT
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*blinks back tears* I think I get the implication so I won't say but I'm suprised that Quat would still go to Tangle instead of spending the day with Duo. if he had stayed would he have risked becoming Duo's next screw? Man, Wuffers knows nothing of the situation and i don't think Duo uses Quat as Wuffers implies. Even though Quat does feel that pang of hurt or is it jealousy when Duo lays up with a different guy but he has some comfort in knowing some aspects, both good and bad, of the real Duo. (^_^) update s'more please!
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Title: Oi...
Reviewed By: priscel (*_*) [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 19:04 CDT
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... this is interesting, I would like to see how the eventual relationship between Duo-chan and Q-chan develops!
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Title: MeLaiya
Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 12:00 CDT
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interesting, keep it up
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